Super MOON Haiku

Super MOON Haiku

A Poem by Frieda P
"

closest and largest full moon of the year

"
I could have touched you

with your face lit so brightly

awed in your splendor



© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
The April 24, 2013 almost full moon as captured by EarthSky friend Steve Pauken in Arizona.

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Lovely 'moony 'write.A truly inspiring poem by one who is learning to see the brighter things in life.Good!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A full moon is a sight worth seeing......it is mesmerizing!!! lovely write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the moon. I always loved it chasing me in the car when I was a little girl. Lovely haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It did appear as if one could just reach up and touch it! Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Her face did indeed
shimmer alike to the moon,
and, she was the moon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful piece capturing a beautiful natural sight there.

Truly wonderful.

BP

Posted 11 Years Ago


Splendid haiku, for a splendid view! It was quite gorgeous here too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Perfection! one to savour.

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautiful.
Okay what's with the 25 characters rule????? One word will often sum up everything I'm thinking and now I'm just plain out irritated. gr.
However, I enjoyed your thoughts, Frieda. Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful. :) I love looking at the moon, it is truly inspiring...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2013
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Tags: super Moon, splendor, Haiku, awe

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Frieda P
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