Poison Ssssenryu

The snake in the grass

likes to sneak surprise attacks

beware of poison

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Poi-sin Poi-son, Worst stuff I ever tried to eat so far in life poi,Snakes they do taste like chicken.
Sad note, where is Diego ? Will he come back ? Another note. I still don't know where or when they will open the "Whole Hog cafe" in New Jersey. or when I will right you a poem worthy of it.

[Frieda P]

Ha poi-sin would have worked too...I thought of posing also, I don't know but hurry it up!

[lee von cleef]

Ah just keep those "Selfys" coming....

[Frieda P]

Still waiting on the piggie....

[lee von cleef]

gotta run weeee weee

[Sami Khalil]

What if someone is a snake charmer?...lol
A good one...:)

[Frieda P]

If you know of one, let me know, I'll send you a check in the mail! ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Lol
Cash it at the bank of love I guess...Just kidding...:)

[Frieda P]

The bank of love eh, which street is that on again Denial & Bust? ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. Postal service delivers there too...:)

[Frieda P]

Okay so FedEx it right away! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)

[Quill~]

This one is sneaky!
I hate surprise attacks!... I guess that's why they're called that. lol
I love the colored font, and also found the dangerous message in you senryu to be cleverly written. A Scandalous write, nice!

[Frieda P]

Moi, sssneaky? Ssssurely you jest bad girl! ;-P

[Quill~]

naw, you're the bad girl... bad, bad girl!

[Frieda P]

Ssssometimes you just have to fight fire with fire ;-)

[Quill~]

I hear ya!..it's burn or BE burned!

[Frieda P]

EXACTLY, how did you get so smart? ;-)

[Quill~]

i'm learning... I have an idol to look up too. ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Many types of snakes in the grass. Need to keep our eyes open and beware of the poison bite. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Many, many types Coyote, thanks so much my friend.

[Jack...]

Ssssimply Ssssspectacular. I wish you would have posted this warning earlier, I think I have already been bitten. V for Venom.

[Frieda P]

Sssso sssorry ssssir...