Poison Ssssenryu

The snake in the grass

likes to sneak surprise attacks

beware of poison

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Poi-sin Poi-son, Worst stuff I ever tried to eat so far in life poi,Snakes they do taste like chicken.
Sad note, where is Diego ? Will he come back ? Another note. I still don't know where or when they will open the "Whole Hog cafe" in New Jersey. or when I will right you a poem worthy of it.

[Frieda P]

Ha poi-sin would have worked too...I thought of posing also, I don't know but hurry it up!

[lee von cleef]

Ah just keep those "Selfys" coming....

[Frieda P]

Still waiting on the piggie....

[lee von cleef]

gotta run weeee weee

[TL Boehm]

me no likee snakes. I don't like anything that slithers and bites. You know I heard that rattlers are learning to "not rattle" because the rattling ones are the ones that are getting caught during round ups. Not sure if that's true but it would be a sneaky snakey reptile that learned not to out itself. No warning just venom. Great poem here.

[Frieda P]

Is that so, never heard that one before, those rats, I mean snakes! Wow, how weird is that, thanks TL.

[Rebecca Buller]

Brilliant sssenryu, Frieda. That snake in the corner looks a bit hungry:-)

[Frieda P]

I think he already took a few bites so you're safe for now Rebecca, thanks! ;-)

[Rebecca Buller]

Ha-ha!! That's a relief:-)

[DCT ponderings]

Very clever Frieda. It made me think of the lyrics from one of my favorite song by Wynonna "I Will be"- Never cross the open field for the one snake in the grass. I liked this.

[Frieda P]

I don't think I know that one, will have to check it out on youtube, thanks DCT.

[Zahra]

Clever senryu, really liked it. These snakes really are everywhere. Well penned

[Frieda P]

Yes they are, thanks so much.

[kublakhan27]

Clever title again haha Grass can a snake's best friend...the best-case scenario is that it impedes their progress long enough for you to see it coming...

[Frieda P]

One can only hope Benji....

[kublakhan27]

I hear you...

[s y e]

Freakin' snakes!!! Really? Yuck but good poem. Now I am watching my step. Lmao.

[Frieda P]

Ha I should have given you a warning noodlebumble, I thought you hated spiders!

[s y e]

Spiders, snakes, sharks! Ha, tons more!

[Stella Armour]

i had a snake he was called "Sid" and he was a proper little charmer..with several skins.. had a man like that too... he was also called Sid..lol (true)

[Frieda P]

Lmao Stella, you crack me up girl :-)

[Kristin Lee]

Very clever. I hate snakes. now I need to read something happy and snake free!!!!

[Frieda P]

I'm with you on that Kristin, all varieties, thanks.

[SyberRose]

I like the SSssenryu...haa...I guess Red is on vacation or something...I imagine people are busy in the summer...Rose

[Frieda P]

Actually she was twice bitten, she's gone for the antidote ;-) Thanks Rose

[Rita L. Sev]

Damn. Now I'm worried about snakes. I think the cafe might need an exterminator... but at least we have poetry, a great anti-venom...

[Frieda P]

Always the voice of reason you. I think so, there seems to be cracks in the asylum ;-) Thanks Rita....