Poison Ssssenryu

Poison Ssssenryu

A Poem by Frieda P

The snake in the grass

likes to sneak surprise attacks

beware of poison



© 2013 Frieda P


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Poi-sin Poi-son, Worst stuff I ever tried to eat so far in life poi,Snakes they do taste like chicken.
Sad note, where is Diego ? Will he come back ? Another note. I still don't know where or when they will open the "Whole Hog cafe" in New Jersey. or when I will right you a poem worthy of it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Ah just keep those "Selfys" coming....
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Still waiting on the piggie....
lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

gotta run weeee weee



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Oh yes I've met a few of them in my travels, that's why I wear rubber boots to avoid what they leave behind. I hate sucking the poison out of some poor sucker though, don't you?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

It's not on top of my list of favorite things to do no, haha, thanks Vincent!
Snakes in the grass seem to be everywhere at the moment. So don't forget your shoes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Will red stilettos do the trick, they kick a*s ;-)
Danger can strike in the most unlikely of places. Good one Moonbeam.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Dale, and you know I adore when you call me Moonbeam ;-)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Good cause I am not gonna stop doing it :)
Sneaky buggers aren't they? I'm sure this is about something, but what I don't know. Isn't that what snake pits and gasoline were made for... eel BBQ anyone? Lol... No idea what I'm saying - that thought just popped in my head :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

If this was N'awlins we'd be deep frying em yep. ;-)
I'd gladly sip on snake poison, I find the concept enticingly morbid

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Are you sipping some now? ;-)
Tai Ryens

11 Years Ago

Metaphorically speaking ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What else? Oi!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah snakes can be a 'quiller' if you don't keep a distance or crush them fast. Got the message my Lady!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I knew you would my Lord!
Maybe a lawnmower might......? They hide in the long grass and use camouflage, don`t they? Well done, hun. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Can I borrow your poem for that Pete? .........
that's for sure 111111111111111111111111

Posted 11 Years Ago


redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Making sure to get 25 characters in huh?? Guess there won't be anymore reviews that just say "Good j.. read more
I hate snakes... Nothing a rake or shovel won't kill. Lol... ;-pp

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Indeed beware.....excellent :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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