Poison Ssssenryu

The snake in the grass

likes to sneak surprise attacks

beware of poison

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Poi-sin Poi-son, Worst stuff I ever tried to eat so far in life poi,Snakes they do taste like chicken.
Sad note, where is Diego ? Will he come back ? Another note. I still don't know where or when they will open the "Whole Hog cafe" in New Jersey. or when I will right you a poem worthy of it.

[Frieda P]

Ha poi-sin would have worked too...I thought of posing also, I don't know but hurry it up!

[lee von cleef]

Ah just keep those "Selfys" coming....

[Frieda P]

Still waiting on the piggie....

[lee von cleef]

gotta run weeee weee

[SteveB]

Wonderful use of the hissing alliteration. Very nicely done.

[InsanityWriter]

Gotta love alliteration... ;)

[Astro]

I liked it as soon as I saw the way you wrote the title. Love the green font too. I will be wary of snakes in the grass.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed an those bited fester, well done!

[Shaun Payton]

People can snake like too lol Figuratively speaking.

[B-poet]

Poisonous snakes are never a good thing yet this senryu is a great write in the making. Nice work. :)

[ANTO]

Unfortunately the grass is long and the snakes are many (at least in my neighbourhood). We need St Patrick to get rid of them all ..lol

I loved your use of the Sssss - it really ssset the ssscene

[Archangel Gabriel]

A very good account of the low reptile and it's danger. Strange how we all instinctively flinch at snakes and spiders.

[David Scott]

Personally I love reptiles of all types. I think they are too often misunderstood. Steve Erwin was my hero!
However, I think these creatures should be avoided unless your trained to deal with them... Like good old Stevo! RIP.

[Frieda P]

Oh I'm not afraid of those kind of reptiles either, there's snakes, and then there's snakes, if you catch my drift....Yes, Steve was great, great loss.

[Mark]

bites in the butt! I have to

[Frieda P]

Haha that snake had good aim!