Left Unsaid Senryu

prompted by ...unsaid, I guess the kimmer was my muse!

What is left unsaid

bellows through governed mindset

moods inclination

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

That's so true, really...the things left unsaid are always tearing s**t up in your mind, creating moods in which no one really has any idea why you're in...and...holy cats :-D I was a muse! xoxo

[Traci]

So much truth in these 3 lines, a brilliant write Frieda.
I am usually one who speaks my mind, but oftentimes later wish I had just kept quiet.
But the mindset is much more at peace when thoughts are expressed.

[Frieda P]

Yes that's usually me too Traci, thanks so much.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree with the other reviewer . It is screaming brilliancy...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sami :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Grazie Mille

[Frieda P]

What no smiley face, you always leave a smiley face, now you've got me worried :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Sorry I forgot...:)

[Frieda P]

Whew, you made me nervous! ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Frieda P]

If you stop smiling around here, we're in deep dodo...haha ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

OK. THX

[Frieda P]

You're NOT smiing again :D

[Sami Khalil]

☺☺☺

[Frieda P]

Better, now I'm doing the happy dance :-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Rebecca Buller]

This was a brilliant senryu, and you inspired me to write my own. Thank you for that. Wait, should I bellow? I'll just keep the bellowing to myself:)

[Frieda P]

Will have to check yours out Rebecca, thanks so much. :-) Keep bellowing my friend...

[Rebecca Buller]

Ha-ha! I will:)

[s y e]

Next time, I'll scream them, that way nothing will be left unsaid and if whoever I scream it to doesn't like it then they can get to heck! Ha. Nicely written, Frifri!

~ Noodle.❤

[Frieda P]

Ha another new name noodlebumble?! Thanks love x

[s y e]

Yes, it is! I love it, it's cute.... x

[Jack...]

I was going to say something, but decided to keep it to myself...wait...I feel bellows trough governed mindsets coming...ok, I'll say it. Another great senryu Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Funny Jack...very funny.

[Rita L. Sev]

Those things unsaid tend to scream at us until we expel them. Well done, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Boisterous yes Rita, thanks so much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and perhaps if it had been said, the mood would be lighter.

that which we keep to ourselves often becomes a heaviness...

excellent wording here.

jacob

[Frieda P]

I can never decide which is better, usually I open my big mouth and then wish I hadn't, so who knows, thanks jacob.