Entrance'd Reverie

You light my path

                 with orchid sunlight

in your voice 

                I hear the melody of angels

         as wildflowers dance to the harmony

    of countryside's waterfall

        crystalline air

butterfly musings fancy

           the bewitching sprays 

you are the starry trance

                  of a sun kissed sky,

       whilst moonlit passages make me sigh

 cream in my coffee, 

                the 'good' in morning

you put the glint of 

                   smiles in my eyes

~exquisite reverie that

             takes my breath away~

Author's Note

captcha~archpoet

Reviews

[V]

Remember, remember the Fifth of November,
The Gunpowder Treason and Plot,
I know of no reason
Why the Gunpowder Treason
Should ever be forgot.

[redflutterby]

You are a complete and utter a*****e!! First of all I've already blocked you so don't bother trying your ratings slam on my poems!! If you want to review people you don't go around posting the same stupid movie quote over and over. Take your bullshit elsewhere...got it!!

[SyberRose]

You light my path
with orchid sunlight

A lovely write...and I especially loved the above line...Enjoyed frieda...Rose

[Rita L. Sev]

The "good" in morning... simple and sweet. You present here an easygoing love song in this piece.

"you are the starry trance of a sun kissed sky, whilst moonlit passages make me sigh..." Sun and moon, all consuming devotion... and the cream in my coffee - your poem runs the gamut of affection in all of its facets. Well done, Frieda!

[Sami Khalil]

"you are the starry trance
of a sun kissed sky,
whilst moonlit passages make me sigh"
A beautiful poem with a lot of magical descriptions...Always with a creative pen...:)