Entrance'd Reverie

You light my path

                 with orchid sunlight

in your voice 

                I hear the melody of angels

         as wildflowers dance to the harmony

    of countryside's waterfall

        crystalline air

butterfly musings fancy

           the bewitching sprays 

you are the starry trance

                  of a sun kissed sky,

       whilst moonlit passages make me sigh

 cream in my coffee, 

                the 'good' in morning

you put the glint of 

                   smiles in my eyes

~exquisite reverie that

             takes my breath away~

Author's Note

captcha~archpoet

Reviews

[B-poet]

Beautiful written imagery and tone as well. A fine write and read. Nice work. :)

[AYVID N]

Love is everything beautiful and the cream in the coffee. A very feel good poem from you Frieda. I forgot my travails for some moments.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another of your sublime writes with the use of the most lovely of word chains that skip and dance with colour across the page.

[Archangel Gabriel]

A lovely gentle poem full of beautiful love Frieda. Orchid sunlight indeed, lovely phrase!

[DCT ponderings]

What a soft romantic poem. I would love to be bathed in orchid sunlight. But i have to say
cream in my coffee,
the 'good' in morning
This is pure love to me. :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Your writing is always so enticing and enthralling. I am in love with the sublime texture that traces your lines. Amazing wording here, and the imagery is beautiful. Delicate, delicious, and totally Frieda :)

[redflutterby]

Beautiful as always dear friend...shame that one of this sites instigators has decided to target your art. While your words bring a smile it barely helps the disgust I feel with the immature drama here. So sad...

xo

Amore, to compare a love with : " cream in my coffee,
the 'good' in morning" is bliss, my Italian heart. You never fail me dear...such an endearing good piece of work yet again, smooth, soft, and full of love. So well done.

- Elisa

[Mark]

Light and airy.

[David Scott]

Your voice is consistent in this poem. Admiration and respect mix with longing and satisfaction to lift the soul. I think your use of the word "exquisite" can be reflected back to describe this poem.