Entrance'd Reverie

You light my path

                 with orchid sunlight

in your voice 

                I hear the melody of angels

         as wildflowers dance to the harmony

    of countryside's waterfall

        crystalline air

butterfly musings fancy

           the bewitching sprays 

you are the starry trance

                  of a sun kissed sky,

       whilst moonlit passages make me sigh

 cream in my coffee, 

                the 'good' in morning

you put the glint of 

                   smiles in my eyes

~exquisite reverie that

             takes my breath away~

Author's Note

captcha~archpoet

Reviews

[Souladareatease]

Ahhhh a Beautiful write to good people!!!
excellent Pen!!!

[rhythm&blues]

Very lovely read whomever this was intended for is a very lucky person.

[Rebecca Buller]

...you are the starry trance
of a sun kissed sky...

An enchanting piece, Frieda. You always manage to make my day a tad more whimsical.

[Quill~]

You've poured a delicate flavor in my mid-afternoon coffee...sweet, smooth, and exquisite words that I thoroughly enjoyed! A delicious write Frieda. :)

[lee von cleef]

Good morning Knot, a click and a tease, but even now knowing the pattern I still click Then Knot, anticipation... wets my lips , now thirsty with want, Cherry Hill New Jersey, lucky spot I think I will write a poem to the "Whole Hog Cafe" soon to open, Real Bar B Q , coming to the Reality State.!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh dear....to be the subject of this poem would really warm the heart.

beautiful words.

[gabrielle]

"cream in my coffee,
the 'good' in morning"

This piece is as mild as the cream in my coffee. stunning as always!

[Jack...]

One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. This is so soft and filled with affection and emotions and happiness. You, my friend, have brought a huge smile to my face with this piece. Very nice.

[Angel]

Magnificent. A light, airy piece, full of love and happiness. Very nice write indeed!

[Pete Langley]

A beaming bright smile of a poem, sweetheart! Quintessentially reverent (did I say that?) Well done love. P.