Entrance'd Reverie

You light my path

                 with orchid sunlight

in your voice 

                I hear the melody of angels

         as wildflowers dance to the harmony

    of countryside's waterfall

        crystalline air

butterfly musings fancy

           the bewitching sprays 

you are the starry trance

                  of a sun kissed sky,

       whilst moonlit passages make me sigh

 cream in my coffee, 

                the 'good' in morning

you put the glint of 

                   smiles in my eyes

~exquisite reverie that

             takes my breath away~

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zahra]

This is really fresh and soothing piece, well crafted lines, beautiful.

[luviva]

this is a light hearted poem.
just shows the satisfaction that you get when your
Entrance'd Reverie is with you.
nice one..

[eglantine]

agreed

[The Lancashire Rose]

Reverie, ahh such a word. I love the light mood of this poem, and I almost forgot to look outside the box for any other meaning than written for a spouse/partner. These beautiful words can describe anyone that we have great appreciation and respect for. Glad I stopped by.

[Onku Ghosh]

Wonderful!!!! Great job as usual.I like the line "the 'good' in morning "very much.You write with so much ease it seems you just have to hold the pen to paper and thoughts flow out and fill the paper......no effort is needed from you.

[Foxemerald]

Your lines in this piece are truly becoming, feminine, and filled with a delicate fragility. Sense perception is driven through with the force of angels, as you carry the reader with a heavenly harmony. The treasure of this poem is its soft enigma, and fairy-like dance of beauty. Wonderful.

[Baby Ricochet]

Aw shucks. It's so purdy

[Emerald Seas]

Stunning, my friend! Simply stunning :)

[Leandro Mendez]

I just absolutely agree with Noodlehead.

[s y e]

"you are the starry trance
of a sun kissed sky,
whilst moonlit passages make me sigh"

I love how all your writes are outstandingly written. You write with so much passion and put your heart and soul into each write.

You have some superb imagery in this write;

"You light my path
with orchid sunlight" ~ Wish I could have come up with that! I am so jealous of all your amazing imagery. Ha.

Lovely job, Frifri!

~ Noodle.ツ

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Very well done. Such a lovely read!