Rhapsody's Swagger

We danced around the fire 

                naked

our souls like whispers

                           in the wind

moon smiled gently 

               with a twinkle in his eye

enchanted trees swooned and swayed

    heaven sent some shooting stars

                             to light our desires

streams rippled in waves of elderberry plum wine 

            wild horses stopped stampeding in our wake

poppies frolicked their petals to our  pulsating tempo,

   pounding beat of our hearts thrashing

                           sounded a gentle rhythm

our bodies bent in unison to the swagger

         intertwined in rhapsody's concert  of harmony

we meshed in our perfect weave of euphoria

              rapturous exaltation that lit up our dark skies

Author's Note

Picture prompt from a friend.

Reviews

[Jack...]

It is amazing to me how you can write a poem like this, mentioning only the color plum, but have it radiate like light flowing through a prism engulfing me in all of the colors of the spectrum. I am hypnotized by the offering, overwhelmed with desire and sweating from the heat that has surrounded me. This is absolutely beautiful. stunning, delicious and penned by the most wonderul of poets. I suppose we can coin a new phrase, "Beauty pens beauty". I loved this.

[Frieda P]

You leave me speechless Jack, can't say thank you enough...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And a swagger of a poem with panache and flow and silky sensuality!

[Frieda P]

Oh la la, love your review John!

[redflutterby]

From the first line I was enchanted. What a sultry vision.... moonlight, a fire and wine. Dancing in unison completely taken over by the rhapsody and exultation. Steamy and provocative...luv it!! xo

[Frieda P]

You know I love that word 'enchanted' Red, thanks so much! x

[Sami Khalil]

" sounded a gentle rhythm

our bodies bent in unison to the swagger

intertwined in rhapsody's concert of harmony

we meshed in our perfect weave of euphoria"
This poem sure does make us swagger to its melody in harmonious senses ...The stars are smiling down upon you...Well done...:)

[Frieda P]

Awh, smiling stars, doesn't get much better than that! Thanks Sami :-)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)