A very clever writing, Frieda. Some people need a little more "growing up" to do before they can sustain a mature relationship, others still - never learn to truly love... life it is a paradox at times.
"when will I learn you loved yourself more than me" love the line! Funny story I am trying to put to poetic form. If I can manage it, I will post soon. I tell ya... this past weekend was full of all kinds of stuff coming out of the blue - must be something in the water! :)
Lovely writing - as always!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Oh can't wait to read that one! ha...nice to see you back, thought we lost you, water or the moon, i.. read moreOh can't wait to read that one! ha...nice to see you back, thought we lost you, water or the moon, it's always nutters, thanks Sera! ;)
11 Years Ago
Bat-s**t crazy extended family - nothing better to do than bs about things that don't concern them! .. read moreBat-s**t crazy extended family - nothing better to do than bs about things that don't concern them! Just annoyed me beyond reason for a few days - apology followed, but still just nuts.
The other thing (poem perhaps to follow) ... yeah, too funny! A quarter of a century later... I swear it was "bring up the ancient past" and see what she thinks weekend! Ugh - Nothing on my part, but a quirky bit that I have been chuckling about ever since!
11 Years Ago
Now you've got me really intrigued, this better be good, no pressure though. ;-P
11 Years Ago
Oh, I think it's hilarious, but someone was quite serious.
Ha those are the best stories, when is this coming to a theater near me? ;-)
11 Years Ago
Ha, if I'm brave (because he'll never be on this site) I may actually post the picture(s) he sent me.. read moreHa, if I'm brave (because he'll never be on this site) I may actually post the picture(s) he sent me of he and his beautiful bride. hahaha... jeez...
11 Years Ago
Oh my, shaking my head and rolling my eyes, simultaneously, can't wait! Laughing here... ;-P
Well portrayed the one sidedness of a relationship doomed to drown. One thing I have learnt recently is that if you are a giver you need a giver to balance you.
Biting and sad. We never truly know what someone's agenda might be and when it is revealed in our vulnerability they have the power to kill us again and again.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Yep, our own vulnerability will get us every time, thanks blue....
REally sad, but in our 'human' societies people get used to harming others and if they are given the chances again and again it becomes a routine for them. Very masterfully expressed, really very good.
We yearn so much for love that we see it where there is only a shadow - and the shadows are only too happy to exploit this. Penned to perfection, Frieda!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Oooh, doing a happy dance to your review, thanks Rita!
A very clever writing, Frieda. Some people need a little more "growing up" to do before they can sustain a mature relationship, others still - never learn to truly love... life it is a paradox at times.
"when will I learn you loved yourself more than me" love the line! Funny story I am trying to put to poetic form. If I can manage it, I will post soon. I tell ya... this past weekend was full of all kinds of stuff coming out of the blue - must be something in the water! :)
Lovely writing - as always!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Oh can't wait to read that one! ha...nice to see you back, thought we lost you, water or the moon, i.. read moreOh can't wait to read that one! ha...nice to see you back, thought we lost you, water or the moon, it's always nutters, thanks Sera! ;)
11 Years Ago
Bat-s**t crazy extended family - nothing better to do than bs about things that don't concern them! .. read moreBat-s**t crazy extended family - nothing better to do than bs about things that don't concern them! Just annoyed me beyond reason for a few days - apology followed, but still just nuts.
The other thing (poem perhaps to follow) ... yeah, too funny! A quarter of a century later... I swear it was "bring up the ancient past" and see what she thinks weekend! Ugh - Nothing on my part, but a quirky bit that I have been chuckling about ever since!
11 Years Ago
Now you've got me really intrigued, this better be good, no pressure though. ;-P
11 Years Ago
Oh, I think it's hilarious, but someone was quite serious.
Ha those are the best stories, when is this coming to a theater near me? ;-)
11 Years Ago
Ha, if I'm brave (because he'll never be on this site) I may actually post the picture(s) he sent me.. read moreHa, if I'm brave (because he'll never be on this site) I may actually post the picture(s) he sent me of he and his beautiful bride. hahaha... jeez...
11 Years Ago
Oh my, shaking my head and rolling my eyes, simultaneously, can't wait! Laughing here... ;-P
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..