Music Senryu

Music Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Senryu challenge by New Yawk Steve

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Satisfaction~The Rolling Stones
No girly action
even the devil knew my game
satisfaction sucks
Landslide~Fleetwood Mac
Saw my reflection
life changes of my  seasons
afraid of falling
Like A Rolling Stone~Bob Dylan
I used to be fine
now I have to compromise
on my own, unknown
Summertime~Janis Joplin
Living is breezy
no tears for the weary rich
No one can harm you
Jack & Diane~John Mellencamp
Two kids rocking on
beat goes on after it fizzles 
changes to real life
Born in the USA~Bruce Springsteen
Born American
made me kill my fellow man
Dark red, white & blue 
Nights In White Satin~Moody Blue

Hear black emptiness
Letters written, never sent
yet, still I love you

Kinks~You Really Got Me

I can't sleep at night
no clue what I am doing
you really got me

Sweet Child O'Mine~Guns & Roses

Her hair safe and warm
recalling sweet childhood
where do we go now?

A Thousand Kisses Deep~Leonard Cohen!

Streak runs a while
Seems real, yet boogie defeat
Kisses my soul deep

© 2013 Frieda P


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Complete and total awesomeness, Frieda! Landslide is one of my all time favorite songs. These are all great! Steve is getting the Ladies to bring it tonight!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SteveB

11 Years Ago

(Being laughed at by the ladies explains why he can't make then bring it)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh, with you hon, not at you. ;-)
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ditto!
This rocks!... loved them all, but my fave is Summertime~Janis Joplin.
I used to sing Me and Bobby McGee...memories... *sniff*
awesome write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quill~

11 Years Ago

*he he* the opposite happens for me... I sing like a beautiful bird. ;)
(not really) lol
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I should have stuck to dancing, demon alcohol! ha ;-)
Quill~

11 Years Ago

damn devil's wine! ;)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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