Aye! This is superb! I really like Senryu...a complete drama in 3 lines or more or less 17 syllables. And you made here many of them based on those beautiful songs.
The brilliant Frieda rocked my world!
Music Senryu. Frieda's Work.
Brilliant idea
Wish I'd thought of it.
Very envious Bugger.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Ken, it was an exercise SteveB started off with classical movies, and then he challenged me .. read moreThanks Ken, it was an exercise SteveB started off with classical movies, and then he challenged me to do a theme, of course I'd pick music, glad you enjoyed it!
Love it!!!! This is perfect; all my "classic" favs portrayed. I love 'Sweet Child' and 'Born in the USA'. Very interesting concept indeed.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Friday, was harder than I expected, condensing an entire song into a Senryu isn't easy, but i.. read moreThanks Friday, was harder than I expected, condensing an entire song into a Senryu isn't easy, but it was a fun challenge, glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks Steve, needed the diversion, it was fun, but not easy to condense an entire song in that few .. read moreThanks Steve, needed the diversion, it was fun, but not easy to condense an entire song in that few words, same with movies I guess....
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You did it very well.
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Now where's Angi's?!
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What is Angi's topic?
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I don't know, thinking on it...have any ideas? I'm not sure she's even aware of it, it was Steve's .. read moreI don't know, thinking on it...have any ideas? I'm not sure she's even aware of it, it was Steve's idea! ha
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I just got back on and saw this! I didn't know I was doing these! What shall my topic be? I have .. read moreI just got back on and saw this! I didn't know I was doing these! What shall my topic be? I have never done a senryu. What are the rules?
11 Years Ago
Basically, haiku without the nature theme. Senryu tend to be whimsical. So, 17 syllables, 5-7-5, no .. read moreBasically, haiku without the nature theme. Senryu tend to be whimsical. So, 17 syllables, 5-7-5, no rhyme.
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