~But a Dreamy Whisper...

  

     i had a lovely dream

                          or was it a dream?

            feelings still linger like hot fiery ice

    i am certain you touched my face

            caressed my heart,

      held my hand

    thought i caught a glimpse of you

                 out of the corner of my eye

    chalked it up to wishful thinking

                                and lunatic ravings,

      the next moment,

 
​              the gentlest breeze,

      a fragrance remembered so well,

                 a discernible whisper in my ear,

             and I noticed there, tucked at the nape of my neck

                            wildflowers in my hair

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

" the gentlest breeze,
a fragrance remembered so well,


a discernible whisper in my ear,"
I'm so glad you are dreaming some nice dreams for a change among all life's troubles and aches. We need them to refresh our souls and give us hope...Bravo...:)

[Frieda P]

For a change, whatever do you mean Sami? ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. :) Your words flow do ethereally. You've done a magnificent piece. (:

[Zahra]

the gentlest breeze,
a fragrance remembered so well,


a discernible whisper in my ear,

and I noticed there, tucked at the nape of my neck

wildflowers in my hair

beautiful ending, such an enchanting piece, lovely!

[Tai Ryens]

Once again grasping at the memory faded, enticing and thoroughly sorrowful. Well done.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

"wildflowers in my hair" -- sublime image.

Such a gentle and sublime moment in time. I love the way that you are able to shift between the light and dark...you are like the dawn, stuck someplace in between, and it is beautiful.

[Frieda P]

I love wildflowers and the thoughts brought me there, thanks so much Friday.

[Muse]

and I noticed there, tucked at the nape of my neck
wildflowers in my hair

Warm breath on my neck, I just got the chills " the good kind I assure you."
Ethereal and dreamy Frieda.
Stunning work like always. xo

[Frieda P]

Jazzed by your thoughts here Cobra, I felt this one, thanks so much. xo

[Rebecca Buller]

Can you see me, Frieda? Of course you can't because I am a puddle of goo. Ah, this was so romantic. Bravo, milady!

[Frieda P]

Ha Rebecca, I know that feeling, have been there, so happy you liked this one, many thanks.

[Rebecca Buller]

You're very welcome:-)

[Simone]

this is so beautiful. i loove it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for stopping by Simone, much appreciate the review.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed my darling, was it just a dream! great piece!

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed this one Thomas!

[TL Boehm]

and I noticed there, tucked at the nape of my neck

wildflowers in my hair

Awww. This one made me wax girly and romantic and star out at the blue sky and simply sigh....it was that good.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, wax girly and romantic, I love it!!

[kublakhan27]

You are beginning to dominate my library...you know I relate to these things...xo

[Frieda P]

I have no problem with that whatsoever Benji :-) x

[kublakhan27]

:) xo

[Frieda P]

Ahhh he breathes.... ;-P xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha no comment suitable for live feed at the moment ;P xo

[Frieda P]

Benji!! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

LOL Sorry Mrs. R ;P