Heart Flutters

I've read many sad tunes

           written quite a few,

when my heart flutters

    through your life chapters 

       to reminisce your memories,

butterflies arouse to float on zephyrs

         easing the formlessness of my soul

Author's Note

On a lighter note, the pic moved me to think of the lovely memories, even in death, they live on in our hearts.

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

[Frieda P]

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.

[carol burgess romance]

such a lovely peice...okay can you tell me how you got the butterflys on your page...love butterflys

[Frieda P]

Thanks carol, it's easy, just find the URL you want and add it to images, this one was a gif.

[carol burgess romance]

Thank you so much Stella I have learned something new today

[Frieda P]

Why is everybody calling me Stella, ha....

[carol burgess romance]

Maybe you look like a Stella lol...lets try again...thanks Frieda

[Renée]

familiar...thank you for sharing the photo that inspired your lighter side write

[Frieda P]

Thank you Renee, glad you enjoyed it, I loved that pic too.

[Angi]

The sweetness of memories can keep us afloat. Beautifully done, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

I'll let Stella know. ;-) Thanks Angi!

[Angi]

Damn! I thought I caught it in time! Ha! Nicely done, Frieda dear!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha, I've done it before myself, no problemo & thanks again!

[Rita L. Sev]

Grief can take us down so far, and the only thing we can do to stay afloat is to bask in memories. There is a lightening in this write, and a gentle wisdom. Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, those flutterbys were fighting me, but I got them to cooperate for a while anyway.

[rhythm&blues]

This is darling, love the butterfly, you have such a unique way with words.

[Frieda P]

Butterflies remind me of my sister, thanks r&b.

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Sweet and deeply touching

[Frieda P]

Thanks lynn, nice of you to visit.

[Horizon K.]

... easing the formlessness of my soul...
And I'm sure there were many beautiful memories to relive in your mind. This was melancholy, yet still with that upliftedness in the reminder that there was beauty in this life that is no longer... And we should live this way while those we love are alive too... so we remember what is beautiful that we don't want to destroy...
A lovely one, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Always appreciate your insightful reviews Horizon, thanks so much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so short, so powerful...the reminiscing...

the loss.

jacob

[Frieda P]

Thanks jacob, much appreciate your sentiments.

[Stella Armour]

oh, how gorgeous the imagery coming from these words is... i feel i should be whispering..

[Frieda P]

Ha whispering around me, thanks for the lovely review Stella.

[Stella Armour]

you are most welcome... :o)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Keeping those memories alive in our heart is how we keep loved ones in heaven by our side on Earth. A really touching poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Dale, yes sweet thoughts should always stay in our hearts.