Heart Flutters

I've read many sad tunes

           written quite a few,

when my heart flutters

    through your life chapters 

       to reminisce your memories,

butterflies arouse to float on zephyrs

         easing the formlessness of my soul

Author's Note

On a lighter note, the pic moved me to think of the lovely memories, even in death, they live on in our hearts.

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

[Frieda P]

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Can I be bold here my love and dare say this is my favourite piece from you, well done, a great read.

[Frieda P]

Be bold my love, you like short & sweet, thank you....

[Tai Ryens]

A lullaby to soothe the tense, nonexistent spirit? I don't believe I've read anything quite similar to that, and it was indeed enticing. It reminds me that poetry in itself is nonexistent, and 'tis only our minds that assign the emotions necessary for our spirits to indulge in it.

[Frieda P]

Indescribably jazzed by your review Tai, thanks so much.

[lee von cleef]

yes lighter note, best to wave to the wind,and all it brings, then look back at all it took.....

[Frieda P]

You know lee it always depends on which way the those zephyrs take us....

[lee von cleef]

Far enough , and around, and then you are back where you were ,if wings can soar on a west wind long enough.

[Frieda P]

Let's hope the winds are generous....

[Debbie_Philly]

Beautifully written... moving and packs an emotional punch !! :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie Debbie, hope it didn't hurt ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Amen to this dear friend, the poem and the comment...the positive memories gain strength with the passing of time xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks Benji, I'm glad this one fluttered past you xo

[kublakhan27]

It fluttered through me xo

[Frieda P]

Woo, did that tickle? ;-P xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah, I'm pathetically ticklish ;P xo

[Blue Ivory]

Love the picture of the butterflies! I like how you began. The last lines are sweet.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Siren, glad you enjoyed it.

[Ken Simm.]

A breeze of a poem or a poem of a breeze. Either way superb.

[Frieda P]

So jazzed by your sentiments here Ken.

[Kristin Lee]

This one is beautiful. The good memories will keep the pieces together as best we can and help us remember what it felt like to feel their love. Always.

[Frieda P]

We try the best we can, thanks Kristin.

[PP]

Glad he is back home :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tink! :-) x

[s y e]

:( Dear God, you actually have me crying now. Keep your chin up hun, I know this will bring back memories of your sister, but try think of all the happy times you had with her, think of everything on the bright side, you have the Cafe behind you, sweetheart. xoxo

[Frieda P]

Awh noodlebumble that's s so sweet, thanks darling xo

[s y e]

Pleasure. xo