Your Tears Slid Down My Face

Perhaps you recognized my dark suit in your closet

occasionally your tears have slid down my face

our hearts could be beating in the same rhythm as we speak

your ink has stained my mind, mine has oozed upon your eyes

wide divides with no spaces between the twists of alchemy

no quasi hyphenation counterfeit resemblances to simulate

24 carats of pure unadulterated compulsive purging of the soul

weeping in your tang of bitterness, crying in your soul

with pen to paper, tears to dust through poetic firmament 

smiling behind melancholy eyes ruminating inky connections

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Your poetry is getting more powerful and love the way you use the language.
"your ink has stained my mind, mine has oozed upon your eyes
wide divides with no spaces between the twists of alchemy"
I like the above statements. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Wow Coyote you've made my day with this review, thanks so much my friend.

[Leigh]

A Very personal and strong emotional piece, you write with great power in your lines

[Shivam Murari]

The title itself is so full of emotions that poem makes us drown in the bottle! Very nice poem.

[InsanityWriter]

Beautifully done. (:

[Frieda P]

Thanks Skittles, sorry i missed this one. :-)

[Blue Ivory]

Just reading the title, I thought "Ooh! I can't wait to see what she's come up with now..."
The whole minds being connected together concept fascinates me like crazy! I can't tell you how much. So I particularly love this poem. Your metaphors were great.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Siren, so glad you liked this one...and me too.

[Emerald Seas]

Love the title! So much said and felt in those lines alone - before getting to the poem! Our words touch, pull, tear apart, bring together, and so on shared - as if souls have mingled into one - sometimes the pen of another touches us so deeply we can't help but feel the emotion as our own. So well written, my friend. The last line is such a deal maker - clinched it!

[Frieda P]

Exactly....thanks Sera.

[TL Boehm]

24 carats of pure unadulterated compulsive purging of the soul
WOW. That line. Hmm. Yup. That line just jumped out at me. Not sure why because the whole poem is real and sorrowful = but that line - I just gravitate to it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks TL...much appreciate your lovely review.

[Vikrantsingh]

Wonderful/Magnificent too good :)
Loved it.

Beautiful lines :
with pen to paper, tears to dust through poetic firmament
smiling behind melancholy eyes ruminating inky connections

Loved them :)

Regards,
Vikrantsingh Parmar

[Frieda P]

Thank you muchly for this radiant review Singh. :-)

[Kajal Gulabani]

Well penned.. Thrusting deep agony. Thumbs up !!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kajal, nice to see you again, muchly appreciate the review.

[Kristin Lee]

Wow Frieda, another tear jerker! The sorrow bleeding from these words is enough to bring someone to their knees. It's as if your saying the memory may make you cry but you'll put that pain to eternal rest through poetic words etched on paper and sealed forever in ink.

[Frieda P]

These tear jerkers just seem to pen themselves in the darkness of loss, thanks so much Kristin.