Backstabbing Senryu

Prefer front, thank you

Cut by SWORD or POETRY

either way you bleed

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oops. Those be bloody words, dear buddy, though clever as ever. Sharp, cutting - defensive attack.. tis possible. Better now, maybe, hopefully cathartic?

[Sirius King]

a bloody death
...poets can be butchers

nice on Frieda

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ouch...that blade is sharp..so is the pen.

[nigrum homonculus]

that captcha made me laugh out loud like a drugged up horse. nice senryu though. i'm sure the person who you wrote this about will get the s**t kicked out of them by lady karma.

[Pól]

You're a senuyr warrior, Frieda!

[s y e]

Words hurt more than anything... Well to me anyway.....

[Pól]

No noodle- if u were male you would understand that a kick in the balls is much worse!

[s y e]

Haha! Yeah well.... sometimes ya'll deserve it, haha. You made me laugh so much there!

[redflutterby]

I agree with Paulo...kick em where it counts ends all discussion. Lol.. ;-)

[Pól]

Hehe

[s y e]

I plan to if it ever comes up!

[redflutterby]

I know because I once kicked a jerk there who was acting like a horses a*s.. he stopped talking pretty damn quick!! Lol... ;-)

[s y e]

Hahaha, wish I could have seen!

[Chris]

Simularities can happen... even subjects of one leading to others' thoughts. Senryu are 17 syllables traditionally - hence wordings are tight. Two posted one day, so the same - so different. One was humor, the other Anger.

[Frieda P]

S**t happens...

[Marie]

Did you read Quinfin's poem, or did he read yours?

[Frieda P]

Quin? Last i heard he was named Wolf, He wanted to get romantically involved Marie, and I told him from the start under no uncertain terms that I was not interested in that kind of relationship, only friendship but you know men....so his ego was badly bruised and he's been sulking, ranting, and spreading aspersions to whoever will listen. I can't read his stuff because after I spurned his ridiculous advances he blocked me and went in search of some other (unsuspecting) woman/girl who would fulfill his desires, I heard through the grapevine, he's fallen madly in love after two short weeks, more power to him, I wish him well. Thanks.

[Marie]

Quin went through several disguises, but he's back tobeing hiself, I guess. Your poems were similar,
that's why I asked.

[Frieda P]

I assume you're one of the friends he hasn't blocked, you should ask him.

[KeeD]

Many will try to cross greatness, but she's a lady who wears heels and knows her way around poetry. Stab, stab, stab you may, she'll never bleed out.

[Frieda P]

Ha the red ones! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh yes words can hurt just as much if not more that a physical confrontation.
Very nicely put Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Dale, especially when they're totally misconstrued.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure moonbeam... and you are right.