Turtle Shell Tough Senryu

Toughest outer shell

inside the heart of pure gold

bad rap for turtles

Author's Note

Shytes & giggles, with a shell of truth

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

This really is a bad rap for turtles, but aren't they a powerful metaphor for how we should live our lives? Tough and strong on the outside and tender and delicate inside. That way it takes love and trust to break our outer shell to reciprocate. Beautiful senyru! Love it.

[Frieda P]

So glad you enjoyed my silly Lori!

[David Scott]

"Turtle turtle", from "Master of disguise"... I had to laugh.
Indeed we draw away inside the shell.

[Frieda P]

Ha is that a real turtle? Thanks for reading my nonsense David!

[redflutterby]

Reminds me of someone I know who isn't a turtle... ;-)xo

[Frieda P]

Is she a flaming redhead? ;-P

[redflutterby]

Lol....well I'm turtle like myself but I was thinking of some one else.. ;-pxo

[zainul]

You have exposed the golden heart of the turtle.
Very nice of you,dear poet :)

[Jack...]

Exactly as I was saying...turtles need love too...

[Frieda P]

Ha, I thought you said turtles were messy...silly moi! ;-)

[Jack...]

Q. Why did the turtle cross the road?
A. To get to the Shell station.

[Frieda P]

hahaha you're so corny.....

[Jack...]

yeah, I know. :)>

[Frieda P]

It's all good, I like corny.... ;-)