This is really great. You see, I love poems that are political in nature. Whilst reading this, I couldn't help but picture sardonic politicians around the world. Such potency in your metaphors and vivid imagery, Frieda. After reading several of your poems, I think you can now have an anthology of them. I love that your poems are empowering.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Jazzed you felt this one Day's Eye...politicians would certainly fit the bill here! Thanks so much .. read moreJazzed you felt this one Day's Eye...politicians would certainly fit the bill here! Thanks so much for your glowing review, it's made my day...
The evil ripples under the surface, lurking in the dark, inside the body of a man - betrayer, liar, abuser! Thank you for sharing this incredible piece with me.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks KL< I'm kind of fond of this one myself, glad you read it...
I am intrigued by this poem and how you describe the dual personas of the weir wolf? I like the line 'cut thy own tongue and feed it unto thy ego' great stuff
Oh dear god! I wonder what horrific thing made you write this! Every single line, every phrase, they're all so powerful! I love the last line. It leaves the reader feeling the magic of your piercing words one last time. Damn I missed coming here!
Wow, talk about powerful imagery! I love it. "Have you no soul?" The overall theme of the grotesque indiscretions of the beastly nature hidden within us all...the dark side. And yet, some would argue that even Vampires are hunted by their souls. Great, great write up.
Really strong piece, I wish I could express anger as well as you do. . . Wonderfully woven and really i think all of us have encountered such people in our lives. 100/100
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow thanks for this glowing review, wasn't too hard actually, someone dredged up some old memories I.. read moreWow thanks for this glowing review, wasn't too hard actually, someone dredged up some old memories I have for my abuser, so it merely spewed out, thanks so much!
I want to make a joke about how this doesn't sound like the work of one who doesn't like Shakespeare, but I don't want to make light of what's obviously an intense and visceral piece...the imagery crackles like the flames of hell itself...powerful stuff my dear.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Seriously Steve, I have no clue where that came from, or why, just the way I heard it in my head, mu.. read moreSeriously Steve, I have no clue where that came from, or why, just the way I heard it in my head, must be Sybil at work again. ;-)
11 Years Ago
Haha should I be worried? ;)
11 Years Ago
Nah I'm not drinking that tequila ever again ;-P
11 Years Ago
Haha I commend your bravery, which trumps mine when it comes to tequila ;P
11 Years Ago
Yeah, never again turned into just this once...hence...thine Lol ;-)
11 Years Ago
Haha my influence must be rubbing off ;)
11 Years Ago
Lol I was wondering why I was so jumpy lately ;-P x
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..