Il Bacio~ The Kiss

Il Bacio~the Kiss

The kiss, sublime music

         from the heart to the lips

caressing an earlobe

        or the nape of the neck

fever that spreads like wildfire

         clandestine smooches in the rain

warm embracing showers of bliss

     brimming with currents of electricity

anticipation of captivating butterfly flutters 

       waiting for the ardor of moist sweeping verve

fondling, flicking, fiercely feeling the squeeze

   a tickle of adulation that strokes the quintessence

pucker up....

Author's Note

Reviews

[Aidz]

"Morbido come un bacio" I have this tattoo'd a line from a write I have done in Italian
http://agiannini.com/page1/index.php?id=8298847010725708451

Sorry bout that Frieda but your write reminded me of it and i really wish you had added some in Italian as I think it may have given it more well swish

Great write by the way

[Frieda P]

Nice fookin tat! Ha, if only I could speak the language, and translate usually messes it up...thanks Aidz, parla e scrive italiano?

[Frieda P]

By the way, read and love your poem...really nice, why isn't it here?

[Aidz]

it was once but after WC being scrapped n posted elsewhere pulled em off WC (was a while ago) by the way I cannot speak it either I had a friend , who the poem is for do it for me... hey fungool lmao

[Frieda P]

Hahaha now THAT I capisco!

[KeeD]

Sometimes I feel the value of a kiss is lost in the days before I could experience my first. Oh to bring those days back with passionate kisses, such is the dream of these lips. Beautiful piece, such elegance and ease to your words, loved it.

[Frieda P]

I didn't know they were gone Kee...

[TL Boehm]

sublime music from the heart to the lips. that's how it should be. It should never be a wet sloppy doggy kiss - unless the kisser walks on all fours, has fur and barks. Great poem Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Eww, no, not those! ha...thanks TL.

[kublakhan27]

I absolutely adore this one...I just love the atmosphere it conjures up, and the imagery that drives the intimacy home...I can add this one to the list of my favourite Frieda pieces...puckering up ;P

[Frieda P]

Ha glad you could appreciate the pucker, John hated it! Thanks Benji, puckering ;-)

[kublakhan27]

;)

[emmajoy]

.. apart from being our little mum's fave song .. sighhhhhhh.

Great video for such a romantic poem, words to wrap around two people sitting close, a comforting sharing of what Happy-Love means. It's a gentle, real love without the sizzling heat of other times. But for me, this is memorable cos it's the best recipe ever x ' The kiss, sublime music ~ from the heart to the lips ~ caressing an earlobe ~ or the nape of the neck ~ fever that spreads like wildfire ~ clandestine smooches in the rain ' .. wonderful.

[Frieda P]

Awh, is It, who doesn't adore Casablanca? So thrilled you liked my recipe Emma! Mwah....!

[Tarry Franck]

butterfly flutters - I think we all know how that feels. Lovely poem Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tarry, nice to see you again on my page. :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Nice to be here again. Been dealing with a lot so I'm rarely on but will try my best to change that soon.

[Jack...]

Read my lips...nice.

[Frieda P]

Ha perfect comeback line, were you at Casablanca? ;-)

[Jack...]

yeah, that was me. If you want to find me just whistle. You know how to whistle don't you? You just put your lips together and blow. :)>

[Frieda P]

Oh, you just made me swoon, favorite! ;-)

[Pax]

a kiss is still a kiss ~ a sigh is just a sigh ~ the fundamental things applies as time goes by~
i love the song... i feel the romance and the lovely kiss conveyed in poetry...
sweet and lovely!
romantic!

[Frieda P]

Yep, great song, thanks so much Pax!

[Stella Armour]

i like butterfly flutters too..lol sensuous and lovely Frieda..

[Frieda P]

Don't we all, and we know where to get them too, right Stella? ha...

[Stella Armour]

haha.... yes!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

OK brutal. You ruined a lovely poem with that stupid final line 'pucker up'. Bad Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Ya think, I put that in there just for you John. ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Get rid of it it insults your intelegent poetry!

[Frieda P]

Get a grip John, it was light read, where's your sense of frivolity>MWAH!