B'mused

I want you so badly, I can taste you~

   touch me tender in the middle of the night

     dance with me through my daze of hazes

        send me love notes of rapturous flair

                     wash over me, set me a' fire

 I can hardly exist without you

     let me drink you in, wash over me

focus my dreams, be my jungle  fever

     my sweetest of untamed wildflowers

You make my world tumultuously roar

    raise me to fiercer exhilarating heights,

       when you divert your vision unto me

   let me unfold the mystery of my secret lover

Lovely words echo whispers on a zephyr

     breathe your majestic life into mine

   I beg of thee my love, please 

          crash into me, crush me,  b'muse me

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

wow, talk about intoxicating, sensuous, this is gorgeous, Frieda! This is so romantically lyrical, incredible imagery with amazing fluidity. love, love your choice of words and how they fall into each line on each of the stanzas, this is so dreamy, yet full of raw desire . s**t, i need some chocolate now. thanks for sharing, brilliantly penned. fav'd - 100 to 100

[Frieda P]

You are much too kind Barrie, thanks so much for this amazing review, you've made my day!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome Frieda i will save this on the WORD/reg pc my word on notebook didn't install correctly due to my impatience. glad to have made someone's day :) - take care!

[Frieda P]

You're too good to me Barrie, muchly flattered! ;-)

[ms. barrie]

likewise Frieda :) -- it's a beautiful poem...just being honest :) - happy weekend!

[TL Boehm]

b'muse me! AWESOME! AWESOME AWESOME!

[Frieda P]

Ha that put a huge smile on my face, thanks so much TL!

[Ken Simm.]

I hope your secret lover was taking notes. Not many can do passion like you Frieda. (And apparently the secret lover).

[Frieda P]

Coming from you that means more than words can say Ken, most gracious review, thanks so much.

[kublakhan27]

Two words: lucky guy...one other word: library ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha if only, in my dreams Benji, thanks for the save my friend. :-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah, I know all about dreams Mrs.R...always a pleasure:)

[Frieda P]

Hey, they say dreams do come true, it could happen to you, but of course that's Disney ;-P

[Rogue]

-interrupts-
Really? Oh man, I'm in luck then. Disney owns Marvel Comics now.
WooHoo Prince Charming here I come! :D :D

[Frieda P]

Not sure what that means exactly but go for it babe! ;-)

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha

We need to get you educated in XMen. :D

[Frieda P]

Oh whew, now you're talkin, that's one hunka hunka man oh man! Take me away Hugh....!

[Rogue]

Exactly, Wolvie is definately a hunk of man. :D
http://images2.fanpop.com/image/photos/13700000/rogan-wolverine-and-rogue-13742005-800-600.jpg

[kublakhan27]

She's not a Marvel/Disney character but the first my crush as a kid was Cheetarah from Thundercats, if y'all remember that one ;P

[kublakhan27]

...messed up wording but I just woke up...you know what I was trying to say anyway haha

[Frieda P]

Ha good thing we can read Greek, you two are crazy, what about the read deal? You can't sleep with a comic book character, well I wouldn't put anything past you Benji haha ;-P

[kublakhan27]

http://www.google.ca/imgres?start=277&newwindow=1&hl=en&tbm=isch&tbnid=gM8ruTtjt9smzM:&imgrefurl=http://www.flickr.com/photos/rgaines/1821210292/&docid=k9DzHDib4U64GM&imgurl=http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2302/1821210292_7b989975b6_z.jpg%253Fzz%253D1&w=640&h=480&ei=SRyNUeWzHMi3ywG2zYDIBg&zoom=1&ved=1t:3588,r:82,s:200,i:250&iact=rc&dur=1371&page=13&tbnh=157&tbnw=181&ndsp=25&tx=13&ty=0&biw=1152&bih=712

[Frieda P]

Ha doesn't float my boat hon ;-P

[kublakhan27]

You're a woman, she's not supposed to ;P

[Frieda P]

The whole comic book thingy I mean...If I'm gonna play pretend it's gonna be with a real person, ha....yea I'm delusional, but you already knew that!

[kublakhan27]

Well I was a thirteen year old kid, and there hasn't been many opportunities to break out of the delusion...nuff said :P

[Frieda P]

So why do you still have her poster over your bed? Lol ;-P

[kublakhan27]

I don't have any of her posters haha :P

[Rogue]

Wait.. What?
I'm not in love with a Comic Book Character.. I am a Comic Book Character!
You said Didney could make my dreams come true. :D

[kublakhan27]

Haha actually she's been replaced by two even lower-profile characters in my older years...they're anime characters but I've drawn them and they're both in my photos :D

[Rogue]

^^^ -grin- So your tastes have evolved?

That was supposed to be Disney up above not Didney.. Who, by the way, has informed me they are fresh out of Prince Charmings. So I took a raise instead. :D

[kublakhan27]

Haha yes, I'm older now...not that I've ever outgrown Disney ;P I've always been more of a Looney Toons guy though...suits my humour better haha And I DO have a LT poster haha

[Rogue]

Looney Tunes? Okay, maybe you can explain something here. A roadrunners maximum speed is 20 MPH and a coyote's is 43 MPH. Was Wile really obsessed with ACME's product line and not the roadrunner at all? :D

Animaniacs was a cute one.. "Elevator goes up." "Elevator goes down."

[kublakhan27]

Haha well I have the box set with a lot of interviews and Chuck Jones - who came up with the two - asked the same question, leaving it up to the people to decide...oh and you may have noticed that the Road Runner always stays on the road, which may have given him a speed advantage over Wile E. who traveled through the desert sand mostly ;D

I also like Animaniacs...that was probably the last good WB cartoon actually...

[Frieda P]

Ha Road Runner, now him I recognize, otherwise I'm lost with you two loony tunes... ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha nobody beats Taz though...well Yosemite Sam comes close ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Powerful secret to hold. Well described in flowing unbridled passion.

[Frieda P]

Love 'unbridled passion' John, thanks so much.

[Jack...]

Fortunately for me I sleep, and because I sleep I dream, for only in my dreams would I ever hear a woman's voice say these things. Your poem has moved me to a dream-like state where the sun shines on brilliant fields of beautiful red flowers and blue birds play in the air above my head while an angelic poetess reads these verses from the heaven above. Please don't wake me...Beautiful Frieda, so very beautiful.

[Frieda P]

What an enchanting review Jack, always the consummate romantic you, thanks for your kind words my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

A slice of passion this cloudy afternoon - all-consuming desire for another. Frieda, you have a gift for putting your reader right there with you.
We used to follow a local acoustic duo called Elaysha who had a song called "What You Do to Me" with a similar theme - this was playing in my head as I read your poem.

[Frieda P]

Happy to hear you were hearing music with this one Rita! Thanks so much.

[redflutterby]

WOW!!! This knocked me over and took my breath in just the first five or six lines. Absolutely sinful and mind blowing. I think the heat just kicked up twenty degrees in here. Good lord I'm melting..lol. Someones secret lover better be ready....smokes on the horizon!!

;-)xo

[Frieda P]

Now if only I could get something other than my muse to fit the bill, ha...thanks so much Red, glad lI could knock you over! ;-)