B'mused

I want you so badly, I can taste you~

   touch me tender in the middle of the night

     dance with me through my daze of hazes

        send me love notes of rapturous flair

                     wash over me, set me a' fire

 I can hardly exist without you

     let me drink you in, wash over me

focus my dreams, be my jungle  fever

     my sweetest of untamed wildflowers

You make my world tumultuously roar

    raise me to fiercer exhilarating heights,

       when you divert your vision unto me

   let me unfold the mystery of my secret lover

Lovely words echo whispers on a zephyr

     breathe your majestic life into mine

   I beg of thee my love, please 

          crash into me, crush me,  b'muse me

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

wow, talk about intoxicating, sensuous, this is gorgeous, Frieda! This is so romantically lyrical, incredible imagery with amazing fluidity. love, love your choice of words and how they fall into each line on each of the stanzas, this is so dreamy, yet full of raw desire . s**t, i need some chocolate now. thanks for sharing, brilliantly penned. fav'd - 100 to 100

[Frieda P]

You are much too kind Barrie, thanks so much for this amazing review, you've made my day!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome Frieda i will save this on the WORD/reg pc my word on notebook didn't install correctly due to my impatience. glad to have made someone's day :) - take care!

[Frieda P]

You're too good to me Barrie, muchly flattered! ;-)

[ms. barrie]

likewise Frieda :) -- it's a beautiful poem...just being honest :) - happy weekend!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Nice writing.. Keep it up. Do u read mine 2 WHY and WHO IS A POET,

Regards,
Lucky

[Claire Twinn]

A tornado of passion, each first line is a masterpiece in itself.

[KAOlmsted]

I love it when you write poems for me xD

Seriously though...this was intense. Like waves crashing...very cool.

[Frieda P]

OMG now everyone knows! Can't you get that pen of yours under control, not that I don't enjoy it when you go wild. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

xD

[Stella Armour]

ooh yes... very Cohenesque as Rose says...lol.. liked this one Frieda (a lot)

[Frieda P]

Ha, you gals have Cohen on the brain, that's always a good thing, thanks Stella!

[Stella Armour]

i would like to have Cohen in other places too Frieda..ahahaha

[Frieda P]

Ha! Now that made me laugh out loud! ;-) You wild thing you...!

[Stella Armour]

well "Everybody Knows"..lol

[SyberRose]

I would love to hear Cohen recite this one...simply beautiful Frieda...hugss...Rose

[Frieda P]

I'll talk to Leonard, see what he can do for us, thanks Rose!

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem young lady

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mark, I mean for the remark about being 'young' ha ;-)

[Angi]

Crash into me! One of my favorite Dave Matthews songs. Perfect, perfect imagery here.

[Frieda P]

Glad you took it there, doesn't get much better than that Angie!

[Foxemerald]

The rhythmic quality is like a suction. This is a wild thought that is spun out of a feeling, that takes me along to a world of fire, and breathes out beautiful stanzas to the reader. Deep prose-

[Frieda P]

Love your review Foxemerald, thanks so much.

[janimarei]

you're one of the best writer's i've had the pleasure to come across. this filled me with so much blush it was embarrassing. it kindled in me the spark of first love and the shyness and desires that come with it.

[Frieda P]

Wow, you just nearly made me pass out, thanks so much for pausing on my page and the glowing review janimarei.

[icelandicblue]

M'Lady this is simply enticing. It should be whispered behind garden walls. You never disappoint Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Sweet whispers sounds like a good plan blue, thanks so much.