Dancing in the Madness of Sweet Psycho

It was a prolific day i lost my sanity

       splendiferous beyond compare

i lay back in violaceous grassy knolls

    breathless, you sent me over the edge

stars were bursting in symbiotic ecstacy

              moons lie pale in comparison

living for the danger of your toxicity

            your sharp as a knife cuts, abysmal

within my sinful soul's lustfulness

          strap me in hysteria's restraints  

if this is what deranged feels like,

          i felicitously breathe in delirium

pain and pleasure the paradisiacal tonic

             i ache for you like my next fix

you brought out my sweet psycho

             touched by your trenchant reality

marinate me in your juices

         if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce

let me savor  in this chimera

                  i'll dance this crazed frenzy endlessly

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

let me savor in this chimera
i'll dance this crazed frenzy endlessly
chimeras....wow. intriguing usage in this poem. (Tam goes happily off on a daydream about chimeras....) There was a specific "heat" to this piece too. YUP! Twas awesome.

[Frieda P]

Wow don't know how I missed this awesome review, you're too kind TL!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Savor the sweet madness my dear!...it's not a bad thing to dance in the throes of crazed frenzy... Now that's what I call Living!!!
Brilliantly penned.~xo~:)

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance to your review, thanks Robbie! xo :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow! The word combination is stunning, great helluvah write. Love the word play it's brilliantly crazy, the best. :)

[Frieda P]

And I'm loving your review here Marc, much appreciated my friend. :-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As a mental Heath professional I recommend compulsory admission to the state mental hospital, or alternatively a f*****g good shag! Lol

[Frieda P]

Lol, as if I had to think on that one! Thanks John ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sorry. It's a sunny bank holiday and I am soaking up the rays so my head is a little hazy! Lol

[Frieda P]

Are you stripping down again? ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Always.that is what the sun is for. No white bits lol!

[Frieda P]

Ouch, naughty bits get burnt fast...lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nah factor 20 so early in the season! besides I am a seasoned campaigner!

[Frieda P]

I'm not touching that ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My factor 20 is expensive not greasy lol!

[Frieda P]

Ha!

[gabrielle]

Woah. it's getting hot. :). the sensual darkness in this piece made me shiver in delight. Happy Monday!

[Frieda P]

Woohoo, mission accomplished! ;-)

[redflutterby]

Ah what a sweet illicit joy ride into madness. An intoxicating thrill beyond the edges...hurts so good but oh so bad for you. Dark and sensual for this Monday morning. No coffee needed now..I'm wide awake!! ;-)xoxo

[Frieda P]

Ha did I forget to mention this was already caffeinated? Lol ;-) xo

[Jack...]

Marinate me in your juices...wow, I love this line...sounds like a great recipe to me.
I ache for you like my next fix...when I first read this I thought it said netflix...hey, the eye sight is not what it used to be

Once more you have compressed the feelings of a lifetime into a few short but tantalizing lines to greet us on this Monday morning. Very impressed again.

[Frieda P]

Always you flatter me Jack, if you want, I'll share my recipe, just saying....

;-) Thanks so much for always being a dear friend...

[Jack...]

Oh please, yes.

[Sami Khalil]

"strap me in hysteria's restraints
if this is what deranged feels like,
i felicitously breathe in delirium
pain and pleasure the paradisiacal tonic."
Hahaha. Frieda ; this made me smile a little to joke with you for I can call the psychiatric ward or I know where to get a chair ... Just kidding.
As usual the poem is awesome...
By the way : I need one myself for I feel that some days...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha I thought I saw you there Sami! ;-) Thanks my crazy friend.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...I get my inspiration from there too...Lol Have a great one...:)

[icelandicblue]

Another intensely sensual poem from you but this one is tinged with madness. I am totally enamored of this line:

strap me in hysteria's restraints

You are always to conjure deep and multi-faceted images.

[Frieda P]

You act as if you've never been blue, haha, thanks so much!