Dancing in the Madness of Sweet Psycho

It was a prolific day i lost my sanity

       splendiferous beyond compare

i lay back in violaceous grassy knolls

    breathless, you sent me over the edge

stars were bursting in symbiotic ecstacy

              moons lie pale in comparison

living for the danger of your toxicity

            your sharp as a knife cuts, abysmal

within my sinful soul's lustfulness

          strap me in hysteria's restraints  

if this is what deranged feels like,

          i felicitously breathe in delirium

pain and pleasure the paradisiacal tonic

             i ache for you like my next fix

you brought out my sweet psycho

             touched by your trenchant reality

marinate me in your juices

         if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce

let me savor  in this chimera

                  i'll dance this crazed frenzy endlessly

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

let me savor in this chimera
i'll dance this crazed frenzy endlessly
chimeras....wow. intriguing usage in this poem. (Tam goes happily off on a daydream about chimeras....) There was a specific "heat" to this piece too. YUP! Twas awesome.

[Frieda P]

Wow don't know how I missed this awesome review, you're too kind TL!

[shivohumsohum]

I am the mother,
I am the father
and I am the gentlemane

[Frieda P]

I have no inkling what that means, but thanks for the visit.

[shivohumsohum]

not ink
..this is cybertext

[Rita L. Sev]

" I'll dance this crazed frenzy endlessly..." I do believe you would do just that! Sometimes it is a very good thing to be driven crazy, and your poem sings that sweet madness perfectly! Great!

[Frieda P]

Hah, you know me too well Rita! Thank you.

[Sam]

Your details make a flow to your piece of writing!!
Great Job! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for stopping by SamRox, much appreciate the visit & review. :-)

[SyberRose]

I love that title ha..isnt it great when someone can bring out the psycho in you ha.
A fun read....Rose

[Frieda P]

Ha dancing to your review, thanks Rose!

[Acucena G.]

Great poem , the flow is perfect its just spectacular . Wonderfully written

[Frieda P]

Much appreciated Acucena.

[Acucena G.]

My pleasure

[Deron Alexis]

LOL totally enjoyed myself with this one the total madness was delightful which is cool because deranged is usually chaotic and full of danger but person just loves to revel in it marinate me in your juices WOW mind blown XD

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, this one made me laugh, so happy you enjoyed it Deron! ;-)

[lolawants]

wow crazy s**t :)

[Frieda P]

Lol, thanks lola....

[Rebecca Buller]

"...if this is madness, i maniacally aquiesce
let me savor in this chimera
i'll dance this crazed frenzy endlessly."

This reminds me of something that Poe--who I consider a mad, but literary genius--might've written. In fact, Aristotle once said, "There is no great genius without a mixture of madness. We need to savor this madness and release our "sweet psycho." To be normal is so dreadfully boring.

[Frieda P]

Wow that you mention Poe just floored me, thanks so much for your kind review Rebecca, much appreciated. I visited your page but it was blank...where's your stuff for me to read?

[Rebecca Buller]

I promise to have something posted soon, Frieda:)

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a plan, looking forward to it :-)

[Ken Simm.]

Now this is rolling in words so that they stick to you. I love it.

[Ken Simm.]

I'm going slightly mad perhaps?

[Frieda P]

Woo, doing the happy dance in your review my dear friend, love it when you visit Ken!

[Emerald Seas]

Jeez woman... I do believe you enjoyed writing this one! :)
We all need a little unbriddled madness in our lives. Those that stay so atuned to the straight and narrow have no idea what they're missing!!! :)
Excellent.

[Frieda P]

Haha you better believe it Sera, thanks so much! ;-)