~Perhaps

Never what it seems

   a trifle splash,

hardly makes a sound

on rainy days it disappears

baubles of braille upon a vast ocean

    the shape of infinitesimal teardrops

if you listen intently,  perchance

    a swishing rustle can be heard,

                perhaps, i heard you sigh

Author's Note

PURPLE RAIN DROP by ArwenArts

Reviews

[Jack...]

Perhaps this is beautiful. This little poem just seemed to float on air, as I do each and every time I read your pieces. This one tickled and giggled and sighed ever so lovingly. Still I sit here amazed and wondering, how do you do this? Each and every day you find the magic to make me smile. Frieda, you do amaze me.

[Frieda P]

Awh Jack, you're too kind to me, this review deserves a squishy hug. :-)

[Corset]

that's a beauty Frieda , glad to see you are back in the saddle :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, yeah rough riding but back, thanks Corset ;-)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

" if you listen intently, perchance
a swishing rustle can be heard,
perhaps, i heard you sigh"

Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mehak, glad you liked this one.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime. :)

[s y e]

Ooooft, this was a great write, I loved the structure of that poem. Very light and whimsical. Lovely write, pickles ;-P

[Frieda P]

Lol...very funny hunny ;-P xo

[s y e]

Bahaha funny hunny ;-P You lurve it xo

[Frieda P]

Mwah! ;-P

[s y e]

♥♡♥

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautifully simple. I love the sublime texture of your writes. I see a metaphor here, as I do in most of your pieces, and it is quite intoxicating. Sensory overload :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for this glowing review Friday. :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The eyes can be deceiving that is why we must use all our senses to understand the truth. Fascinating little poem.

[Frieda P]

Oi, I got a fascinating... ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Perhaps the world will appreciate your rain and your tears and find blessings in both. This write is different from your others ...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha, how could you tell Sami...you saying I'm not usually soft? Lol ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[redflutterby]

I hear it...the sound of rain drops on my window!! This is light and whimsical... make me want to dance in a spring rain!! ;-)

[Frieda P]

I'd dance with you, but you know... ;-) Thanks Red! x

[redflutterby]

Lol....no dancing in the rain together? ;-p xo

[Frieda P]

~Perhaps, when my foot is better hun! ;-) x

[redflutterby]

;-Dx