Rock Star from Mars

Rock Star from Mars

A Poem by Frieda P



I wanna be a rock star, not for sex & drugs
the fact that you don't have to make sense
no one questions if you're in control
you can write lyrics about a bed of kleenex
when faces come out of the purple rain
take a nap in hotel california with a walrus
smoke cigarettes & drink chocolate milk
just a couple of my addictive cravings
like the fat old sun driven by a heart of stone
who's got joo joo eyeballs and gets no satisfaction
i want to shine bright like a diamond 
so who cares if anyone understands me
if' i've got blisters on my fingers 
will anybody really care if i dream in metaphors
i'll carry that weight a long time boy
livin' in a hilltop house drivin' a big black jet
with a bedroom in it for fortune & fame
why should i stay to get eaten by worms 
who plucked their eyebrows on the wild side
when i could always pretend like Charlie
i'm a bitchin. total freakin' rock star from Mars
koo koo ka choo & fook this too

© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Sheer nonsense to keep my head busy....

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i picked out some Lou reed and a lot of Beatles....awesomeness and coolness abound in this inventive and wanton departure...i give it three thumbs up (yeh, i borrowed an extra from the walrus) and it was easy to dance to.... so, gangbusters frieda posies!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I probably needed some music with this one quin, you're good at that! And I know hon, I know!! ;-P
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

heheh!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

xD



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"Sugar plum fairy came and hit the streets. Looking for soul food and a place to eat. Went to the Apollo. Should have seen them go go go say hey sugar, take a walk on the wild side." You just gotta love a song about drag queens, drug dealers and transvestites. I like this poem. Thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha thanks Mark, it was fun and a diversion for my brain! I'm sure you walk on the wild side, well.... read more
busy or dizzy wonderful lady*)*)
this just rocks...love the diamond bit
forgot my line though-fat bottoms makes words go round-hahahah
truly creative and clever makes for a perfect Sunday smile
I care if you dream in metaphors -that's what makes you write like you do
thank you so for sharing the word smile


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Busy, dizzy, it's all the same in my world Holly lol, thanks so much, it was fun!
Nobody wants to be a Rockstar that is one. Like any writer or musician or creative person it is the need that drives them. Yes there are perks.. But, the downside is down. You can only say what you think and feel in song. Never try to share emotions or feelings, or even the fact you are human with your fans.. They will shred you for it. Your closest and true friends you can usually count on just one hand or even just a few fingers. The few that have stuck there through the highs and lows. You become loathe to let any but these loyal few close to you in any way. And first and foremost.. You must be a god. Always playing that part. Your fans will accept nothing less. Ever! Don't apologize, care, or even drop that mask of arrogance. They smell weakness and you are done.

In short, my Dear.. Mayhap you should just stick to poetry and write and say whatever you want.
-grin-

I did like the write and saw the playfulness in it. :)

P.S. Lest we forget the crazy, stalker horde. -shudders- The stuff nightmares are made of.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha are you famous by any chance? ;-P
Rogue

11 Years Ago

Sure! Just pick up a comic book with a big X on the front. :D
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh geez, I'm not touching that one! xD
koo koo ka choo, lol, that's awesome Frieda, lotsa good tunes bumping around in this :) You are on a roll!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i'll bring the liquor...and some fine bubonic chronic
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hey quin, that stuff's potent, we don't wanna lose our dignity here....
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

dignity? we don't need no stinking dignity! just so mo diggity!!!
Lmao....you come up with some real gems just keeping busy girl!!! Now if you could only be on the cover of Rolling Stone!! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, then I'd be writing this crap from Belize! lol
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Hey you need an assistant for that crap writing you know!! ;-)
i picked out some Lou reed and a lot of Beatles....awesomeness and coolness abound in this inventive and wanton departure...i give it three thumbs up (yeh, i borrowed an extra from the walrus) and it was easy to dance to.... so, gangbusters frieda posies!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I probably needed some music with this one quin, you're good at that! And I know hon, I know!! ;-P
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

heheh!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

xD
Nonsense but it makes sense to me lol :) really a quirky one with style, always a great write from you, even you are not serious writing it, your hands touches gold. lol thanks for sharing Fries :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Aha now I know :), Ok friend sleep now 1 Am here. take care
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sweet dreams :-)
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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