Rock Star from Mars

Rock Star from Mars

A Poem by Frieda P



I wanna be a rock star, not for sex & drugs
the fact that you don't have to make sense
no one questions if you're in control
you can write lyrics about a bed of kleenex
when faces come out of the purple rain
take a nap in hotel california with a walrus
smoke cigarettes & drink chocolate milk
just a couple of my addictive cravings
like the fat old sun driven by a heart of stone
who's got joo joo eyeballs and gets no satisfaction
i want to shine bright like a diamond 
so who cares if anyone understands me
if' i've got blisters on my fingers 
will anybody really care if i dream in metaphors
i'll carry that weight a long time boy
livin' in a hilltop house drivin' a big black jet
with a bedroom in it for fortune & fame
why should i stay to get eaten by worms 
who plucked their eyebrows on the wild side
when i could always pretend like Charlie
i'm a bitchin. total freakin' rock star from Mars
koo koo ka choo & fook this too

© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Sheer nonsense to keep my head busy....

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i picked out some Lou reed and a lot of Beatles....awesomeness and coolness abound in this inventive and wanton departure...i give it three thumbs up (yeh, i borrowed an extra from the walrus) and it was easy to dance to.... so, gangbusters frieda posies!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I probably needed some music with this one quin, you're good at that! And I know hon, I know!! ;-P
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

heheh!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

xD



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There is a benefit to this life, but a price as well. A while back, I was in Hollywood on business and ran into Prince in the bar of the hotel that I was staying at (it was a hotspot for a little while). He was quite nice, and we chatted for a bit. Before he left, he thanked me for not asking him questions about himself or his music...for just treating him like a normal human being. I was just being me, but I guess that brought him some sense of relief. As I said, benefits and a price.

I do understand what you are getting at, though, the way that some of these people produce absolute nonsensical "shite" and yet they are praised as though they have given birth to a golden egg. Funny... Well, you had me with this one. I rather enjoyed your take on something like this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was really a fun read Frieda...and I laughed at quinns comments...your poems certainly arent boring...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


A bedroom for fortune and fame...that has a nice ring to it ;P I could certainly go for some rock star aloofness these days...as it is, I feel destined to be a rock and not to roll...do I even need to mention that I love this piece? ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I wonder if they'll throw in the sex and drugs as a bonus for buying...
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I'm almost positive those are extras Benji, always the dreamer, you. ;-)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha a dreamer indeed Mrs. R...nothing but a dreamer ;)
I wanna be a martian too (LOL--JK) Luv this... to be that free, oh how lovely life would be...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha a martian or a rock star, wait, they could possibly be from the same planet, thanks PF.
Butch Decatoria

11 Years Ago

Ur welcome.
hahaha oh Charlie Sheen

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

11 Years Ago

no his new show Anger Management... it's another kind of crappy sitcom lol, where he plays an anger .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh that's priceless, he plays the therapist! hahaha
Luke L

11 Years Ago

yup even though he's a little crazy I think he has a good sense of humour about things haha I like t.. read more
this one is really good :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks.
Ah, it may be nonsense, but with such mastery did you weave those 'Floydian Echoes' and 'Beetlemania'. Few listen to the fool riding a 'pig', but the words that he sings make 'us and them' 'Come together'. I can see some method to your madness and I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yay, so happy you picked up on those, thanks Astro!
Astro

11 Years Ago

No prob, keep it up, I liked the style.
For those about to rock, we salute you!

Fun, fun, fun, and all of this while my guitar gently weeps.

Rock on Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I went a little bit crazy, thanks, and that's one of my favorite songs Jack!
Crazy woman

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Lmfao!!!! You know what I set myself up for that's cool, hahaha.
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Lol :O)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, just caught this, and YES you did.....!
no this is not craziness..what we do here,its a star show,or even better
only they were lucky or not for hitting it to the whole wide world
but we make a big great show here,just wish them to come and see
what beauties we have here,and hidden,it all jolly sings and cry
we make the world shock and dance,we rock it as we like with words
who could do it but us,few words and i make all the cafe dancing and singing
few thoughts i spill on here and there and i change the whole scene and mood
here on my cafe,i make all moves and dance to my rythm,like it or not
its my movie i direct,its my show i give the roles to all
i orchestrate music and dance like a pupit show for all to see
this was a calm spot till our voice risen for all to hear us
and come to watch the beauty and magic we create..with few words we made all the difference in the world,we create beauties here..ha ha
lovely write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

11 Years Ago

thank you,you inspired it all,ha ha
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha yep, that's what we do here, feed off of each other! :-)
bluessadmood

11 Years Ago

exactly..

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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