~Xanadu Bliss~

A butterfly fluttered by

    planting a kiss on moi

took my breath away

      before I could retreat

told me to be joyful

      feel the sunrise, open your heart

i thought i recognized this dainty flitter

    that danced upon my souls ambiance

ambivalence drained prudent upon my shoes

    my elated tootsies  danced serendipitous

with the taste of of Xanadu on my lips~

    a kiss is but a kiss unless it's planted bliss

Author's Note

My affinity for butterflies and the delightful photo prompted me to write this one...thanks for reading.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

"you must remember this...a kiss is just a kiss...a sigh is just a sigh..the fundamental things apply..as time goes by" don't know why, but this took me there and i was asking Sam to play it again...you wax poetic so beautifully, frieda, and i love this type of write from you....gorgeous!

[Frieda P]

Why mr quin, are you serenading moi? ;-)

[quinfinn]

ah, cherie...je t'aime moi non plus...but of course!

[Frieda P]

*faint*

[quinfinn]

*smiles and feels strangely content*

[Frieda P]

;-)

[kublakhan27]

How can my breath not be taken away by a piece that revolves around the place I took my namesake from? ;D I can feel the butterflies dancing and fluttering all through this piece...the rhythm is perfect, and the playfulness is infectious...it's nice to see some delightful work coming from you ;P

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautifully written...I love your floating butterflies. There is something in this piece that I just can't put my finger on...as though there are words written between the lines. Well done, my friend.

[lolawants]

I luv your butterflys :)

[David Scott]

Thank goodness we can actually give a kiss status above a diamond now!
(swak) ;)

[Frieda P]

Lol, diamonds usually come cheaper. ;-) MWAH!

[David Scott]

Indeed!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Glorious kiss...
This is playful, sweet, and magical... enwrapped in Bliss!

Lovely write, Friedalicious!~xo~:)

[Frieda P]

Tickled you enjoyed it, that pic was a perfect muse! :-) xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes it was!...your mind is a wonderful place for a muse to live.. ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha not always my friend, not always! ;-P

[Robbie~xoxo~]

well... most of the time. :D

[Frieda P]

Ha sometimes it's that idle beast you speak of! ;-P

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ha ha! Touche' !! ;P

[Frieda P]

xD

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The softest of touches can make the biggest of impacts... what a delightfully wonderful read.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Dale, glad you enjoyed my stint of positivity ;-)

[Androglossia]

This write tickles:) I liked butterflies too. Whether it is the creature itself or the one it symbolizes for :D The last line is superb!

[Frieda P]

So glad it tickled you Maryanne, this was a fun write. :-)

[Rogue]

This is light and whimsical. Never has a butterflies kiss seemed so lovely.
I enjoyed this and the smile it gave me. Thank you. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rogue, I was afraid you'd get into it with me again lol ;-P

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha
Get into it with you again? Aww, now hon, I was just expressin' my views with conviction! :D
Never any worries.. :)

[Frieda P]

Hahahaha, and I was just being sarcastic-I think we've come to some kind of understanding now. ;-)

[Rogue]

:)

[Frieda P]

xD

[lee von cleef]

a kiss...
the kiss...
A fish tale....first,last,biggest,most,smallest..
a kiss...
Eskimo,French,or Butterfly....
Chapped, peppered, sweet cherry coke,denim cush....
Early, late...
A memory of light...
On a moonless night....

[Frieda P]

Thanks lee, always depend on you for an interesting review :-)

[lee von cleef]

Ok your turn a new one Grins and snickers meant to play in the Cobra Lounge, but hey who knows what a Jersy girl likes ?

[Frieda P]

Say what? lol

[lee von cleef]

I asked for a review not a kiss, "Grins and Snickers" My new "bold as the day you were born poem"

[lee von cleef]

Close your eyes read aloud,

[Frieda P]

Pray tell what that had to do with the Cobra Lounge?

[Frieda P]

if I close my eyes I can't read silly....

[lee von cleef]

Have you partner there read to you...Now go review my poem please here me grovel."Grins and Snickers" (The name of the Poem)