Sweet Insanity

craziness ensues...

Sweet insanity wraps around my pinkie finger

I've twisted it tightly in mine own head

a welcome relief from life's gauntlet

i sink into my delusional illusions with ease

if you should think me mad, you'd be deluded

this controlled confusion is just a ploy

for absolution from the intrusions of my pen

the allusion can be quite hypnotic when i'm sane

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Sometimes i think it would be best to give up scribbling.. even our chit.chats inspire you .. meantimes i just suck grit!

' if you should think me mad, you'd be deluded
this controlled confusion is just a ploy
for absolution from the intrusions of my pen
the allusion can be quite hypnotic when i'm sane '

I give up, i'm off to join a nunnery!

[Frieda P]

Suck grits my can! Flip flops & nonsense to that rubbish, ha...I wasn't going to let on that our chit chats were about being insane big mouth! lol...pinky up my friend, cheers, nunnery, I don't think they let you dance like a crazy person in those places, scribble away petal! xoxo ;-)

[emmajoy]

Just tried to scribble, could I .. FILTHY WORD ?!!! Okay, will find you a pickcheer instead! xoxo

[Frieda P]

Haha, is that your F-bomb? lol you're much too sweet Em! xoxo

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

This piece dances on ones tongue, will the sway make us slumber or make us jump, well done.

[ChemicalMadness]

Embrace your inner crazy, as it drives your outer brilliance. Mundane and boring is no way to go through life....live crazy, baby!!! Who's makin the braclets?!?

Nice write ;)

CM.

[Barbara Walker]

They're coming to take me away, oh, oh ha, ha. It's my personal opinion that those in ge in psych wards, have nothing' over the people in charge! I hear what you're saying-I couldn't hold onto my sanity if I didn't let the insanity out once in awhile. LOL

[s y e]

This is me: O.O. I think I am officially under your spell! You have blown me away with this, I loved it. It is short but to the point.

" if you should think me mad, you'd be deluded
this controlled confusion is just a ploy
for absolution from the intrusions of my pen
the allusion can be quite hypnotic when i'm sane"

Oooofty oooof oooft! Wow, flip flops and all that jazz, loved it!

Sorry it took me so long to review, exams have me stumped.

[Frieda P]

Ha, you should have read the first draft, you'd really think me crazy noodles! So glad you liked this one, now fetch me coffee whilst I have you under my spell! ;-P

[s y e]

You're a plonker! I was kidding, get off you're arse and get it ;-P

[Frieda P]

Pfft! That spell didn't last long! ;-P

[s y e]

Nope...... Bahaha

[Frieda P]

Off to the drawing board......... ;-)

[s y e]

Lmao, something stronger is needed ;-)

[Frieda P]

Not many places to go after insanity! ;-)

[s y e]

Lol ;-P

[kublakhan27]

All in all, it was all just bricks in the wall...don't let insanity seduce you to its full potential, the sweetness wears off in a hurry...take care...

[Frieda P]

I think it's too late Benji....you trying to tell me you've already been there? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Yes, and I'm probably still there ;P

[Frieda P]

Hahaha surprise ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah no kidding ;)

[lee von cleef]

Naughty or nice, I read on
Now thrice...
Hooked on life..
Even a sunset can feel warm a moment a mood
A Nobel Nose Silhouette...
Line laced stilettos
Linger...a little then move on....
Time is hypnotic....
With Pinky..

[Frieda P]

Ha what? I know you're half way there...no doubt, thanks!

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah, sweet insanity - where would we be without it? I love this piece, the idea of "controlled confusion at play". That's how I feel quite often. Truth and whimsy flowing from that pen of yours!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rita, wrote this one after talking to a friend of how crazy we really are, so glad you enjoyed it!

[Rita L. Sev]

Some degree of crazy is necessary...

[Jack...]

Once more you hypnotize me with your words and call me insane if you like, but I am just plain crazy about your work.

[Frieda P]

And I'm just plain crazy about your review Jack, thanks!

[Baby Ricochet]

So it's like crazy poetry. I get it, or am I being a dumb red neck again?

[Frieda P]

Ha can I choose both? lol

[Imara]

Remember that "I" should always be capitalized when it's by itself referring to yourself :)
I Love the meaning behind this poem, it's something that I think all writers are capable of and do. Our "insanity" is our inspiration. We dare to dream and put in words those things that no one else can. These thoughts you have these crazy thoughts turn into your writing. Great job putting part of the writing process in words.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Imara, crazy I, is never a capital, silly girl. ;-)

[Imara]

Haha I see that you did there because being a "grammar nazi" that drove me crazy! Haha