Communion of Poetry

This ceremonial ritual speaks only truth, exalting wings of reality                                                         basking religiously in your whorish afterglow, 

              I ingest your sins and feast on them like a gluttonous harlot

Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,

                     I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity

        it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic

 I exhale, the smoke clears to see another moon rise

          you came within me forcefully as my soul arched to the sun

               chants of reckless echoes filled the skies

              This communion branded me with fever

     calculated sketching of quotes from the universe

               a stippled tear and an engraved smile my sword 

I plunge into you with the abandon of a lusty courtesan 

                 you etch onto me as you dip your quill to pen this sacrament,

       bleeding an exuberant cornucopia of enlightened words 

                          ...spoken by endless sacred poets

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic"
A beautiful poem. The above lines are amazing. Poetry should take us to better places. The great Poet's left sacred poetry. Now it is our turn. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks for this great review John, much appreciated.

[Dr. Wood ?]

wonderful as ever....don't you get bored turning out all this great poetry?

[Frieda P]

Ha no...don't you? ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Holly water my arse. You are just one randy b***h lol!
Seriously, this is as always so full of feeling and passion expressed in a divinity of Catholic words

[Frieda P]

Lol now was that nice?! Randy better be good! ;-P

[Rhianne Ney]

Loved the poem and its supposed meaning~ Great job and keep working wonders

[Frieda P]

Thrilled you did Rhianne, thanks so much.

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[gabrielle]

Reading your pieces always take me in trance. The imagery on this one made me delirious. Absolutely wow.

[Frieda P]

Ooo a trance, I like that! Thanks gabrielle :-)

[s y e]

-bows down to you-

Loved it. It was so amazingly well written. ..... you are honestly the Queen at what you do!

[Frieda P]

Ha! You can get up now spaghetti head! Thanks love xo

[s y e]

-stands up- Thank you, your highness xo

[Frieda P]

Did you forget my high tea? ;-) xo

[s y e]

Shut yer gob! xo

[Frieda P]

Lol off with her head! ;-P

[s y e]

lmao!

[redflutterby]

Imagery beyond compare! You baptise us with holy water wrung from your pen. I have knelt at the altar of your words and my soul has been renewed. Your poetry is much like a religious experience. Beautiful!

[Frieda P]

Ha that wasn't holy water hun! ;-P

[redflutterby]

Oops I've committed sacrilege.... I must go to confession now. Repent of my wanton soul.... ;-p