Crazy Like Me

Crazy Like Me

A Poem by Frieda P

Gypsy in my soul, mother in my heart
                                                    ...poet in my mind
tiny dancer,
              dancing to the rhythm of your words,
                           sweet music of pen prancing on paper
                                                               we crash into each other
purging all our happiness and woes
                                                 ... for all the world to see
I think you're a little bit crazy, just like me....

© 2013 Frieda P


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this is you. This is what I'd want you to be described to me as. wherever I go this Frieda will be remembered. A gypsy in her ways with a loving soul :P a mother and a poet by heart and mind. Basically Crazy like me :D I'm all those things, unfortunately i can't be a mother, ha.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh Kee, that's the sweetest sentiment ever, thanks so much! mwah x



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blue jean baby. l a lady. seamstress for the band.....well, that's where you took me with tiny dancer. nicely penned, dear posy. this is somewhat of a departure for you, n'est pas?

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What are you trying to say quin, I don't usually dance on the page?
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i am saying that this both dances and sings, my dear posy. no music video accompaniment necessary.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oooo, I'd dance but it would hurt at the moment xo
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Pax
oh, i see the wit and cleverness in this ;) ~ often times, i can be crazy as messy...
your words is dancing the rhythmic dance of waltz ;)

great work my friend...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's kind of kinky but alright! ;-P
Pax

11 Years Ago

haha... oh i didn't know.. then lets just dance like no one is watching... watch out for the feet ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-)
This is true...we all dance across the page in one form or another; showing parts of ourselves through our words that are highly personal and emotional. Crazy...I don't know if I'd go that far, but definitely "touched". :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

One woman's touched is another's crazy...thanks Friday, always a pleasure hearing from you. ;-)
I love this!!! It resonates with me... Writing poetry to be free. One of my writer friends recently said something to me like, we are all a little bit crazy, and if we get it out by writing about it, perhaps we can remain sane...


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha that ship sailed a long time ago, but good luck to you Horizon! Thanks :-)
Horizon K.

11 Years Ago

Haha... Isn't crazy... Relative?
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My relatives, all of them! ha ;-)
Holy cats, lady, that first line just smacked me upside the head, I was like, hello me, meet me...that was awesome! A lot said in this pithy piece; great stuff.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

And all discombobulated even ;-)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm starting to see your reflection when I look in the mirror or it's the Bellvedere...ha ;-)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xD
wow this is perfect...a poet will say this to someone with whom he or she relates..."you are crazy like me"

and you my friend...are much more than just "a poet in your mind"

you are a poet in the mind of anyone who takes the time to read you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh jacob, you just put a huge smile on my face!
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PP
Is this poem for me????? LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


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PP

11 Years Ago

They are selling Brand Tink at LaSenza!! LOL
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I dare how much they cover?!
PP

11 Years Ago

They are see through!!! They cover all of it and they cover none at all!
Your poem has made me smile on this Saturday morning - seems like you expelled the demons of yesterday's piece, and are left feeling free and happy. Love the form. Absolutely adore the universal conclusion - basically, if you are here, reading this, you share in my insanity! Excellent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, well dontcha? Thanks Rita!
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yes, indeed, I do! ;P
I like this new style. You are the ever creative. A very nice poem full of life and love...Bravo :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha thanks Sami, I needed to dance! ;-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Dance and be joyful for we need it sometimes...You are welcome...:)
Hello Frieda,

Tripping the light fantastic. Excellent read.

Always,

Matthew
A.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo Matthew, so happy you danced with me, thanks!
Matthew Kult

11 Years Ago

I liek them spicy and flirtatious...It's the only way to dance. Thanks for being a partner. :o)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, you better watch out, I always lead...! ;-P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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