Crazy Like Me

Gypsy in my soul, mother in my heart

                                                    ...poet in my mind

tiny dancer,

              dancing to the rhythm of your words,

                           sweet music of pen prancing on paper

                                                               we crash into each other

purging all our happiness and woes

                                                 ... for all the world to see

I think you're a little bit crazy, just like me....

Reviews

[KeeD]

this is you. This is what I'd want you to be described to me as. wherever I go this Frieda will be remembered. A gypsy in her ways with a loving soul :P a mother and a poet by heart and mind. Basically Crazy like me :D I'm all those things, unfortunately i can't be a mother, ha.

[Frieda P]

Awh Kee, that's the sweetest sentiment ever, thanks so much! mwah x

[candaceflynn]

nothing more and nothing less. this is incredible write. and uh, i think you're a little bit crazy just like me ;) loved it!

[Frieda P]

Aren't we all, smiling here, thanks candaceflynn!

[candaceflynn]

you're welcome frieda! :) will check out more of your writings :)

[carol burgess romance]

I enjoyed this very much also the format

[Frieda P]

Much appreciated carol. :-)

[carol burgess romance]

very entertaining

[Frieda P]

Thanks carol.

[Just Kim]

Short but wonderful,
I think everyone has a crazy side.
Amazing write

[Frieda P]

I so agree tabbycat, thanks for the visit and review.

[Michael G.]

I believe most of us are a little crazy. I like your style of crazy. It's much better than some others I've seen... and danced with to the music.

[Frieda P]

Yes degrees can vary, thanks Michael....

[Mark]

Wow, the first line could be something I wrote... well, substituting Father for Mother... I love how you pack meaning in to a succinct write. Very well done.

[Frieda P]

Ha, thanks Mark, somehow I don't see you as a tiny dancer either. ;-)

[Mark]

Hey, in *my* mind stranger things happen!!!!

[Frieda P]

Lol, I hear you!

[Chaos X 3]

I love it. What a poetic way of describing yourself.

[Frieda P]

Much appreciated Chaos thanks.

[SimpleMind]

Amazing Frie! It's a light read, yet the thoughts is there. A little crazy, OH I so love that last line!

[Frieda P]

I see you can relate SM! Thanks so much. ;-)

[Hatter at Heart]

Short but sweet. Even without the visuals, I could clearly see two dancers represented in this writing. Much liked!

[Frieda P]

Thank you kindly for your visit & review, nice of you to say HaH.

[Stella Armour]

i think we are all a little crazy sometimes, after all who defines what is normal?

[Frieda P]

If that even exists, I think it's the setting on my dishwasher is all, thanks Stella.