[You Can't Escape]

My seas are deeper than you can ever imagine

in the garish light of day you still can't envision

how deep the waters go beneath your soul

I fathom in technicolor and drag you to the bottom

from the top of your crown, til you're on your knees,

my power of persuasion will haunt your psyche

like an amused cat with a mouse, I'll toy with you

 inject myself under your skin like a festering toxin

I'm the spirit of sleep that never comes 

in your hour of pain when you seek peace

blink in your head, I'll disperse your bones

I'll take you from the ones you love

twist your mindset til it's crippled

no one can rescue your sanity

I'll remind you of your broken promises

desolate in your forsaken tidings

there'll be no catching your breath,

wreaking havoc, I will force your hand,

you'll be stripped naked to the core

altered thought patterns my forte,

vociferous that one of us is crazy

I hold the power of your deliberation

ever sagacious, I'll never leave your side

I am your mistress of unscrupulous tenet

no way to be saved from my embrace

my torturous grasp is burrowed in deep

entangled within guts and heartstrings

you can't escape me, you're  mine

I am RELENTLESS....

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

You promise? :)

This is so cool, like I was watching a movie or something. Definitely worth the wait. This piece pulls you in by the hiar and drags you through each and every line. Your eyes can't close for there is too much to see, your mouth gapes at what is presented and your body is as restless as your heartbeat. Very cool.

[Frieda P]

If my poetry is dragging you by the hair I've done my job. ;-P

[Jack...]

I so glad I used a good glue this week.

[Lily Mae]

Jack...we just got engaged yesterday and here you are lol..xo ;)

[Jack...]

Oops...uh, oh hi...honey

[Frieda P]

Wait...what? All this right under my nose, I'm going to have to write about ya know you guys... ;-P

[Lily Mae]

I'm just never enough Frieda..poor woe is me.. and Jack ..the last 24 hours was my best ever. sigh.... xo

[Frieda P]

Ha did he write you love poems? x

[Lily Mae]

No.. I asked him to marry me..it was a fleeting moment ;) xo

[Frieda P]

You're too much for any one man, that's the problemo, like the sign says, you can't escape! lol xo

[Lily Mae]

Hahaha I think I ran him off lol..

[Frieda P]

He's probably writing you poetry! ;-P

[Jack...]

No I'm still here, well no, not here, but..um...uh, I just stopped by to borrow a cup of sugar, yeah that's it, sugar. How was I to know a beautiful woman would answer the door, oh, did I just say that out loud? Ok, you caught me.

[Frieda P]

He must be talking to you Lily, there's no sugar here! lol

[Jack...]

Splenda?

[Lily Mae]

Truvia? lol.. as in "True" lol

[quinfinn]

you are either talking about your obsession with quinfinn or a cocaine addiction. either one makes perfect sense. it's okay, i have that effect on women. i am used to it by now. this is a terrific write and it literally boils with seething expression. i love it, every word, every line. go pat your self on the back several times...you earned it with this one.

[Frieda P]

Nope, sorry huckleberry, not this one....thanks for this glowing review though, much appreciated love! x

[quinfinn]

joke......duh!