I love the imagery and the wording here-- "tipsy on the perfume of mushroom wine" and "convoluted with screams for clemency". There is pleasure here, but also pain...and I get the sense that this is a bit of a love unrequited piece. Pleasure is not as beautiful "sans promise"; I enjoyed this feel. Well done, as always.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Friday, I always enjoy your reviews so much.
"sans promise, enchantment falls on fire" oh yeh, i know too well. so...are you in the business of slaying already broken hearts here, or is this a fantasy piece? somewhere in that beautiful, gifted, calculating mind of yours...there beats the heart of a true romantic, and she is screaming for release from that "dark tether"....oh, i get you....sometimes it is scary how much i get you. but then, you slay me with your poetry on a regular basis....i love your twisted heart...and your silver tongued mind.
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11 Years Ago
You are a true romantic huckleberry....haha 'twisted heart & silver tongue', you say the nicest thin.. read moreYou are a true romantic huckleberry....haha 'twisted heart & silver tongue', you say the nicest things!
Wow, loving the metaphor and the couplets in this one .. "mushroom wine, teetered backlash, echoed bumbles, " Interesting piece and provoked thought and wonder.. thank you, shallimar (Rose)
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11 Years Ago
Thanks so much shalimar, so happy you liked this one.
No fun without sincerity and the right deeds to prove it.
The message is awesomely done up in brilliant metaphors and stunning imagery.
Love perfume of mushroom wine.
As always, this was a unique poem to read.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Divya, always an interesting take from you, much appreciated.
If this had gotten any deeper I would have fallen
into the abyss...Loved these lines:
"lessons learned from naked souls
convoluted with screams for clemency"...
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11 Years Ago
Ha, thanks Joe, next time I'll provide a lifeline, we all one....
Such is why I so enjoy erotic poetry. I read this mostly with the thought of erotica in mind, and the disrobing of souls is quite intriguing that I'm surprised I have yet to hear of them until now. Well done, Frieda!
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11 Years Ago
Always an intriguing response from you Tai, disrobing of the soul takes immense trust, thanks for yo.. read moreAlways an intriguing response from you Tai, disrobing of the soul takes immense trust, thanks for your kind review.
Your crocheting needle went mad on this one, love, but I think I worked it out. Having worked it out, I`ll keep my own counsel, letting the enchantment fall on the fire, then rise again like the phoenix. Superb crocheting, Frieda. P.
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11 Years Ago
Ha purl 1 knit 1, wait that's not crocheting, I don't know much about either, thanks for the sweet r.. read moreHa purl 1 knit 1, wait that's not crocheting, I don't know much about either, thanks for the sweet review my friend. x
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..