Reverse Posture

what is this gaping memory

vivid past recklessly crashing 

posturing recondite & shrill

in the recesses of spent blood

crushing the backbone of resolve

moments on the clock that haunt

beckons formidable  to dare a revival

driving insanity as dusky metallic chaser

stuck in reverse on breakneck speed pursuit

esoteric wisps of darkly emotive triggers

shooting the psyche with high caliber ammunition 

head on collision with fatally smoky consequences

survival hermetically sealed ripe within noxious, lethal fumes

dawn reveres the moon's pulse within further contemplation

prescribed elixir dressing wounds for temporary compensation

complications pronounced dead upon arrival...rest in peace

Reviews

[AYVID N]

"dawn reveres the moon's pulse within further contemplation
prescribed elixir dressing wounds for temporary compensation"

- Very impressive. Frieda, you are poetess unmatched here.

This poetry has some great and incredible phrases and lines...

"esoteric wisps of darkly emotive triggers
shooting the psyche with high caliber ammunition " - So intense the agony...


Then...

"survival hermetically sealed ripe within noxious, lethal fumes" - Such suffering to live on...

One of your masterpieces Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Wow Divya, I'm overwhelmed and humbled by your words here, thanks so much, glad you like my crazy rantings! ;-)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Frieda. The lines were just out of the world, this time. I had to say it. :)

[AYVID N]

And if this is crazy ranting, then I would love to be crazy anytime! :)

[Frieda P]

You made my weekend! :-) x

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

WOW! BOOM! BOOM!-Can't expressed more the piece has a unique structure, over the top wordings and insanely great theme and excellent story progression, can't ask for more, you are truly a national treasure. Thanks for sharing very brilliant write my friend (envy) lol :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I don't think I've ever had a review that started with wow and boom boom...lol, thanks so much Marc. ;-)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Wow! this is shocking. the wordings and its arrangement, the mental picture is intense. just like an idividual met death insantly unshocked This is wonderful. well done.

[Frieda P]

Shocking, I like that, thanks so much Onyia-ota.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, an intellectual tongue twister... we must embrace our past for it makes us who we are, but some parts do need to be layer to rest before they bury our future.

[Frieda P]

Interesting Dale, thanks so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure.

[Marie]

Wow! I don't think I could ever do anything like this.

[Frieda P]

I can't tell you how thrilled I am to get a wow from you Marie.

[Rob Santana]

Damn I love the use of your vocab!!! It's such a turn on!!!!! No more hangover, feeling good again!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha you're twisted CREEPER, this would turn you on! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

This looks to me like a stepped Pyramid of reality( Mayan or Aztec ) that takes us to a lost humanity and civilations
with long memeories that crashes all over upon revival and breathes a new dawn. It is all those smoky consequences that chokes us with its lethal fumes.
A powerful write...:)

[Frieda P]

Wow Sami, intriguing review, you made me think about my own poetry now, thanks dear friend :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Good to know...You are welcome...:)

[s y e]

Wow a great write from you with more big words. Feel like im in school haha.

This was great. I loved it

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm gonna learn you some kiddo ;-P

[s y e]

I think you should ;-)

[Barbara Walker]

exorcise that memory!

[Frieda P]

Oi, green pea soup again, thanks Barbara.

[Emerald Seas]

Those pesky memories get us every time, don't they? Reeling us back to the rawness and emotions of yesterday, only to rip the thread holding us together apart again. Terrific write, Frieda. One of your best, and that's hard to say as you write with skill and artistry in much that you do.

[Frieda P]

So sweet of you to say Sera, muchly appreciated!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

"prescribed elixir dressing wounds for temporary compensation"--what a line! I'm enamoured by this piece. Your words are truly enchanting, and I love the flow of it all. I tend to expect pieces of pure beauty and joy from you, but this one is pure beauty and danger, which I absolutely love. You've touched on something new and exciting here. Well done!

[Frieda P]

Did the happy dance after reading your review, wooo...thanks Friday!