~HUSH~

I am your sweetest desire

 or your darkest primordial fear

lingering in the shadows

       waiting to pounce

sending shivers up your spine

in pools of salty sweat

  or a radiant dance

              on starlit moonbeams

      with sultry delight

i will enchant you off your feet

or drag you to hell

you might manage a smile or a whimper

         screaming out in agony or passion

hidden behind closed doors of night

i am lucid & ethereal, 

       a breathing entity

  elusively  transcendent

         you may not capture me

HUSH~

 and sweetly close your eyes

not sure when I'll be back again

Author's Note

Reviews

[AYVID N]

So enthralling and gratifying when we have such power over someone, isn't it? The power to take someone to those ecstatic heights or push them down an abyss of pain! I see you revel in that thought here Frieda and I just went on that pleasure ride myself. Thanks for propelling me!

[Frieda P]

Ha, anytime sister, anytime! ;-)

[redflutterby]

I think you've touched on how a person can be both dark or light. We tend to look at people as being either good or bad but that's never completely the case. What's that Indian tale about the two animals inside of us?... the one that you feed the most wins. Very crafty write.... your ideas are so impressive. ;-)

[Frieda P]

Ha I must have been feeding the jackal so! Thanks Red...sometimes it works, you know how that goes... ;-)

[Ken Simm.]

Show off! Writing all these brillant pieces. Just cos we can't.

[Frieda P]

Pfft! Coming from one of the most talented writers here, you flatter me Ken, but you know....x

[Jack...]

I'll take lines 1,3,5,7,8,9,10,15,16,19 and 20. Anyone want the rest?

Nice work here Frieda and still the amazement continues.

[Frieda P]

So you don't want 2 & 4? I meant thanks a million Jack! x

[Jack...]

Ok, I'll take 4 as well.

[Sam Gregory]

Another enjoyable read, it's amazing how a person can change someones life depending on how they choose to make them feel. Interesting, thought provoking read

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sam, thought provoking review....

[Sam Gregory]

Haha np

[beautiful dreamer]

wowsers frieda! great write!

[Frieda P]

Love a 'wowsers' thanks jen!

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome! mwah!