~HUSH~

I am your sweetest desire

 or your darkest primordial fear

lingering in the shadows

       waiting to pounce

sending shivers up your spine

in pools of salty sweat

  or a radiant dance

              on starlit moonbeams

      with sultry delight

i will enchant you off your feet

or drag you to hell

you might manage a smile or a whimper

         screaming out in agony or passion

hidden behind closed doors of night

i am lucid & ethereal, 

       a breathing entity

  elusively  transcendent

         you may not capture me

HUSH~

 and sweetly close your eyes

not sure when I'll be back again

Author's Note

Reviews

[AYVID N]

So enthralling and gratifying when we have such power over someone, isn't it? The power to take someone to those ecstatic heights or push them down an abyss of pain! I see you revel in that thought here Frieda and I just went on that pleasure ride myself. Thanks for propelling me!

[Frieda P]

Ha, anytime sister, anytime! ;-)

[s y e]

Wow, this was great! I adore this write. It was great!

So many powerful, powerful lines.

Flip flops and all that jazz to you hun xo

[Frieda P]

Alrighty, I got flip flops, yeah!

[s y e]

xD

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Your pen is a smart, erotic and creative pen :) Can't say anything but I adore your writings as I adore you as my friend :) always your fan.

[Frieda P]

Amazon.com. ;-P
Thanks Marc, much appreciated!

[Rita L. Sev]

Another sensual poem - I like the ending of "not sure when I'll be back again" - ah, anticipation! Great - thanks for sharing!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, much appreciated.

[shallimarRose]

nicely done. thank you for the rr.. shallimarRose

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the read & review Rose.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very Nice poem :) Quite curious !

[Frieda P]

Curious, you think? Thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. I enjoy when you dance on romance and desire. I like the desire of the poem.
"i will enchant you off your feet
or drag you to hell"
Some options leave us with limited choice. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I love to dance John, thanks so much.

[kublakhan27]

First of all, you know how to pick tunes ;P I have a few different interpretations in mind here but I don't want to single out any one in particular...they all revolve around seduction in some form though...some of those forms are good but most of them not so much...you've cast a spell here, no doubt about that :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, are you calling me a witch Steve?! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha no, more like a wizard, which is kind of like a witch, but nicer...then again, witches are probably more fun ;P

[Pete Langley]

This could almost - almost - be a piece of poeticized phychospeak. ....the id and the alta ego....the alternate personalities. Whatever it is, it speaks to me, Frieda! P.

[Frieda P]

So thrilled that it did Pete...and 'poeticized phychospeak', love that!

[The 13th Eros]

A powerful aphrodisiac are you, sweet and wild and wanting. Now, let the animal run free to devour. I think you're just getting started and it all sounds good to me. Hushed except for my racing heart... xx

[Frieda P]

Ha just getting started, you're going to watch me crash & burn soon. xo

[The 13th Eros]

It'll burn so good.. ;-)

[marie]

nice work frieda:) love that you are able this aspect into words:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks marie, glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[marie]

no problem:)