~HUSH~

I am your sweetest desire

 or your darkest primordial fear

lingering in the shadows

       waiting to pounce

sending shivers up your spine

in pools of salty sweat

  or a radiant dance

              on starlit moonbeams

      with sultry delight

i will enchant you off your feet

or drag you to hell

you might manage a smile or a whimper

         screaming out in agony or passion

hidden behind closed doors of night

i am lucid & ethereal, 

       a breathing entity

  elusively  transcendent

         you may not capture me

HUSH~

 and sweetly close your eyes

not sure when I'll be back again

Author's Note

Reviews

[AYVID N]

So enthralling and gratifying when we have such power over someone, isn't it? The power to take someone to those ecstatic heights or push them down an abyss of pain! I see you revel in that thought here Frieda and I just went on that pleasure ride myself. Thanks for propelling me!

[Frieda P]

Ha, anytime sister, anytime! ;-)

[khalid]

the sweetness of love doesnt only lay in how we talk about it, it also lies in how we feel it..however we try to express our love feelings, we find words limited..love has always been discussed since early life and still people have alot to say about it as if nobody had ever talked about it..that is because we dont really know what the source of sweetness in love come from..
i loved how you have penned this piece..

[Frieda P]

Thanks khalid, so glad you 'felt' it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

chilling to the bone! excellent F.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Neva, much appreciated.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Entrancing dear Frieda!...yes lovely lady, you are the epitome of sweet hushings...(sigh)
This piece is not only alluring, it can be a dangerous path to go down..you know what I mean? ;)
Sweet and dark meets dreamy... Lovely write! XX

[Frieda P]

Ha how much do I love that?! 'the epitome of sweet hushings' wow....! Thanks so much Robbie.

[Saumya]

this is outstanding dear......!!!! keep writing and rocking

[Frieda P]

Thanks saumya, glad you enjoyed it.

[Saumya]

you are most welcome.....!!!

[KAOlmsted]

Primordial...great band ;-)

Drunken puppies, lady, make up my mind! Do I love you or do I want to run *wHimpering* from you?? (See what I did there? xD) I love the tug of war going on between lust and fear...I try to leave The Brit in this state of sexual reverence as often as I can ;-) That closing stanza was like...yeah.

ben fatto, bella signora xoxo

[Frieda P]

Ha what? They're Irish no? Yeah I got it, doh! Ftw would I do without you, I hardly know how I got through life without you before! xox

[KAOlmsted]

About as Irish as it gets, yeah ;-) You never have to find out ftw you would do without me because I shall leave you never *echo* ever ever ever *echo* Nice sound effects, yeah? xD

[Frieda P]

Wowsers, that'll be a first! ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

I often do things that are unprecedented in your company...remember that thing I did that you swore you would take to your grave ;-)

[Frieda P]

Lmao, yeah but I still have pictures! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

D'oh! >.

[KAOlmsted]

hey...my other eye...wtf happened to my other eye??

[Frieda P]

Probably spying your rack! ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

Please...when referring to my "rack", kindly use its proper title, Spectacular Rack...thank you. ;-p

[Frieda P]

Whoopsie! I thought since it was fukitol friday we could go casual...my bad! ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

xD I forgot it was fukitol frieday! Mia culpa!

[Ohhhwillow]

This is stunning. A powerful display of a menacing heart, by the sounds of it of most powerful and desirable one, with a horizon like ink clouded in water.. You present to the reader immediately a conflict, as in your opening two lines, there is both evidence that you are aware of your seductiveness and that you are desired/considered the prized belonging to a lover, as well as a dark complication - a mysterious, untamed mind. Loved this Frieda

[Frieda P]

And I, love your review Willow!

[Barbara Walker]

Two sides of a coin, each far different from the other. That pain can feel so good before it hurts so bad!

[Frieda P]

So true Barbara, thanks...

[jdr / Jennifer]

Wow! Brilliantly written. This is a very sultry, passionate and desirable write. I agree with the post below- I am surprised you still have a keyboard myself. That is hasn't melted from the heat of your words and the depth of the emotion you have put into this well formed, seductive, yet powerful piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us.

'with sultry delight
i will enchant you off your feet
or drag you to hell
you might manage a smile or a wimper
screaming out in agony or passion
hidden behind closed doors of night'

[Frieda P]

Thank you for such a tremendous review jenn, much appreciated.

[icelandicblue]

i will enchant you off your feet
or drag you to hell

I absolutely believe that is true! I am surprised that your keyboard hasn't simply melted.
You're in the zone Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks blue, the muse took the heat!

[Emerald Seas]

Can I steal this and retitle it with a name? Lol
I'm in a wicked crappy mood, but love the write! :)

[Frieda P]

For you, anything, would I deny a Marine? ;-)