Dream a Little Bliss

~desires to be stuck in a dream

to be stuck in a dream of eternity would suit me just fine

if that's the likes of nirvana, floating along on a spell

let me be nourished by sparkling cerulean waterfalls

spraying peaceful dove coos and enlightened butterflies

reminisces of wafting in the serenity of mother's womb

safe and protected in the sensations of contentment

to fly overhead with the constellations as my friends

swinging freely over magnific amethyst seas nary a woe

looking out over the horizon of promises & sunrises

save me from my mere human existence & yearnings

let me sing with angels on ephemeral argent cloud linings

zephyrs take me away to a land of boundless kisses of bliss

keep me locked in this embrace of slumber's trance of awe

Author's Note

Reviews

[quinfinn]

and you said you never have beautiful dreams or remember them! i think a lot of your beautiful writes are born in your forgotten dreams and your subconscious reveals them to you in moments of "inspiration". this is gorgeous, frieda posies. i love these writes of yours.

[Frieda P]

I think I might just have a good imagination quin...if only, I'd stay in those dreams, thanks hun x

[quinfinn]

always....

[Tai Ryens]

Oh, the purgatorial state of dreams. Nothing is more relieving than being trapped in lucid wonderlands. Well, I, for one, loved to unknowingly poke at my subconscious by worrying about things, and next thing I know I'm wrestling demons. Fun, nonetheless.

[marie]

this dream you have described it truly magnificent:) wish i could have dreams such as those:) amazing write:)

[Porter]

Dreams are a magical place to be. They take the pain of life away. It's hard not to think of what life would be if we were just stuck in a dream, so far away from everything, as you have so beautifully represented in this poem. ~Never Forget

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit, and a great review, much appreciated.

[kublakhan27]

I knew that song had something to do with this as soon as I saw the title of the poem ;P This piece is like a pillow...close your eyes and let the lines come to life...the waterfalls, the butterflies, constellations, it all comes together here to produce a poetic idyll...lovely ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh no, you have me figured out, I'll have to change up my MO now! Love your pillow analogy....doing the happy dance. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha your MO can't prevent me from knowing you well...glad you're dancing ;)

[Frieda P]

Now all I need are some unicorns and a shot at Cohen and life will be perfect! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha no doubt ;)

[Frieda P]

xD

[Emily Feret]

sounds like a peaceful dream. beautiful

[Frieda P]

thanks Emily, thrilled you liked it...

[KeeD]

I love when you use the word zephyr, every time I come across that word I automatically think of you, this was magical and beautiful.. a dream come true. I feel so at peace. Great write.

[Frieda P]

One of my favorite words too Kee, couldn't have picked a better one. Love that it moved you to a peaceful feel!

[Avocations of Amber]

love the free verse here and the way you captivate with colors and ethereal images.....your soul really shines through in this write :)

[Frieda P]

thanks Amber, glad you enjoyed this one :-)

[Sam Gregory]

Beautifully written, It is very relaxing to read outloud indeed, Good work :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sam, much appreciated :-)

[Sam Gregory]

No problem :)

[Baby Ricochet]

That sounds like a great time

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.

[Anushka]

That was truly a beautiful poem

[Frieda P]

So happy you enjoyed it Anushla.