Sweet Nothing

can't breathe...

    until i exhale you from my lungs

can't see...

     until I scrub you from my eyes

can't speak...

     until i expel you from my tongue

can't think... 

          until I excise you from my mind

you coveted the whole of me,

           leaving behind a mere shell

what's left is but a whimper 

           of what i used to be

you assaulted my heart

    leaving it scarred and bleeding

my spirit tattered, shifting on the winds

            of lost loves, lies and betrayal

your exorcism will witness

            the death or life of me

if only the scent of wildflowers were once again intoxicating

             whispering sweet nothings in my ear

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow! Too intense yet submissive thought, I find some struggle to achieve the independent life out from the former. This is a realistic piece, we can’t move if still there is a trace or the shadow of the past that hunting us. Better we clean our self in the rain of fire.

Lovely Piece Frie :)

[Frieda P]

Yes, the rain of fire, exactly...I thought that you might relate to this one Marc, thanks so much for your insightful review my friend.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes :) it is true, I can relate in this piece.

[Frieda P]

I know, remember reading your piece on this, thanks again hun. :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome Frie :) did you drink your coffee seems you are awake the whole day lol :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you noticed! Yep, coffee in hand as we speak. ;-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) I know heheh ok friend I will clean my room and water my bonsai as you instructed once a week. see yah :)

[Frieda P]

Make sure you talk to your bonsai too, they're more cooperative that way.:-P

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

hahahah :) really? lol I will do it. thanks friend :)

[Frieda P]

ha Can't hurt right, although try not to when people are around, they'll think you're off your rocker! ;-P

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) yes

[Frieda P]

xD

[Horizon K.]

Wow, this one is incredible.... The torment of ridding the heart of the person that broke it...
Beautifully written, from the heart, and so so human...

[Frieda P]

You're so kind Horizon, so happy you enjoyed this one, thanks so much.