Piranha

Satire, perhaps.

You said I live life in a fishbowl 

I've taken my risks, so here I float

within the confines of glass houses

you've had your fun & judged

beware the stones you hail

piranhas  once surfaced here

Author's Note

Felt compelled to write something for that absurd picture!

Reviews

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

I knew someone with a piranha in a tank once..I like your piranha(s) better than his
I like the use of the word "perhaps"..you extend that word into the glass houses and beyond.
My friend Bill's sister studies psychology and says that everyone has at least one thing wrong with them. He said it comforts him...
Maybe that should be passed along to the one that said you live in a bowl?
Maybe it'll neutralize their projectionist insecurities a tad, and the piranhas can stay cute and awesome instead of avengers..although I enjoyed that movie
time will tell
parts of this reminded me of a hamster cage with cool tunnels connecting different cages..used to love that stuff as a kid...but yeah, nice work, Frieda

[Frieda P]

Only one? I'd say she's pretty optimistic on that stand...I hardly know anyone who'd fit the bill, we're all flawed, it's acceptance of the piranha that's key. That's for your review, enjoyed it. :-)

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

:D glad you enjoyed. Much obliged as my Justin Bieber photoshoot look alike friend Liz just said
read more:D glad you enjoyed. Much obliged as my Justin Bieber photoshoot look alike friend Liz just said

I say acceptance is a good avenue to go down, even through the bad neighborhoods

[Frieda P]

I would so agree with you on that one...and the Bieber, really? He is kind of pretty....

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

he probly chills with mostly pretty people too...ha

[Androglossia]

beware the stones you hail
piranhas once surfaced here

I so liked those lines. There's an obvious dauntlessness on it. I loved the poem more than the photo:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much since the poem is mine, and I borrowed the pic! ;-)

[Androglossia]

It's my pleasure*_^

[Frieda P]

Just read your poem, I want to marry it! ;-)

[Androglossia]

Lol, I just saw you saved it in your heart!

[Frieda P]

Yes it lives there now! :-)

[Androglossia]

Woohoo!

[Frieda P]

xo

[Monster ^.^]

feisty little creature, aren't you? Well, people can't keep on pushing us! In the end, we have to be firm on who we are!

The picture... O.O

[Frieda P]

Me or the piranha? lol...thanks Monster!