In Junkie Crazed Yearning Tones

A 'shoot out' with a very deserved poet...

Shoot me up~

share your sword with me

cut me with your blade

I get high on your essence

every time you bleed

In junkie crazed yearning tones

I cry out for thee, 

slay me once again

the depths of you I crave

penetrate my soul

Turn my head

  until i beg for more

bend my spine,

 I implore you, please

Ravage me til you vanquish

'the very last breath I take'

Author's Note

If we can discover the meaning in the trilling of a frog, perhaps we may understand why it is for us not merely noise but a song of poetry and emotion. ~Adrian Forsyth

Thanks for the poetry slam John, 'twas a pleasure.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

touche.....engarde...and, curses, foiled again! seems we are both sitting on the fence on this one (oops, pun intended)...you two are playing nice, which is so grown up of you. another monumental sting from the quill of miss frieda posies! can't wait for round two!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha we don't usually play nice, but this was fun! Thanks quin...I think this was round two!

[quinfinn]

well then, onward to round three!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And I thought you a pacifist Quin old boy?

[Androglossia]

I remember saying about jelly on your other poem but this one's making me think of vanilla ice cream with cherry on top:) Ha! Sounds ravishing, isn't it? I don't know but I got all this crazy food thought in my head today. And yeah it may sound crazy but your poem sounds delicious like licking up a melting ice cream that is dripping down the side of the cone, up to that proud cherry on top:) Haha! Your poem is surely adding intensity to this blistering Pacific heat.

[Dream Weaver]

Holy smokes! is this hot or what? I'll go with hot!
Me thinks me has goosebumps! :)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, goosebumps, now that's what I like to hear! ;-)

[lee von cleef]

Ravage ......the nape......Ravage the lobe.....but hey shave first. Ok I will go clean the little condos 12 x12's and leave you alone .Unless you go read Robert Frost, again ...this time his "Tuft of Flowers" then you will understand ...alone and alone.

[Frieda P]

As usual, have no clue, if that's code for you enjoyed it, thanks, if not....you'll think of something.

[AYVID N]

Loved the shoot-out...both sides were awesome and in the process deliciously exciting poetry was whipped up for all of us to relish and enjoy.

Even otherwise, I would have loved to share this poetry with someone but that someone is no more there... (My- -ex, as this makes for a very sexy sensual read even otherwise)

Thanks Frieda. Keep having such shoot-outs. We love the poetic spirit, camaraderie and fun in which they are intended.

[Frieda P]

So happy you enjoyed it, sad side note though...I intend to have more, haven't gotten John smack in the head yet, just barely grazed his toe ;-)

[icelandicblue]

Yes, it hurts so good. The siren's call is too hard to resist and the price is too hard to pay. Nicely done Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Ha yes, hurts so good..silly women that we are. Thanks so much icelandicblue.

[Leslie Philibert]

The title reminds me of The Naked Lunch, so a tough title a la Burroughs and a very visual poem, lots of feelings working here, good one

[Frieda P]

Oh I recall that one, old Majoun & Eukodol were highlights, I see the connection! Thanks so much for your visit & review Leslie, enjoy your weekend.

[stephen dillon]

yes in wild boys or naked lunch but that is exactly the stuff i love

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow, this is something needs to be reckon, amazing write. My imagination gone wild with this sharp blade action tone injecting in this richly adored words play. Brilliant Frie :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Marc, it all started with Toxic, then John did a poetry slam Shoot Me Up, so this the slam back, glad you enjoyed it!

[s y e]

Ha, nice title, firstly! :-P
This was gooooooood, I liked it but you knew I would ;-P
Alot of emotion in this, wow.

[Frieda P]

That came from Toxic that's how it started...thanks farfalle!!

[stephen dillon]

beautiful as a junkie myself i can relate to the emotions one goes through during a relationship with heroin and needles

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit & review stephen...

[stephen dillon]

f'real you nailed the fellings of rage and self destrution copulating with opiates mental illness and shady situations ................stay golden