~Toxic~

I injected you

                 into my veins, 

immediately 

                  started to convulse

   molten fire, heated

                blood to the core

penetrated fluidic

      beneath my skin

i needed a high,

           your prick was hot

 my addiction was out of control

              danger warning flashes burn

 your toxicity spun me turbulent

            i felt you fracture in my bones

intoxicated~

 by the staggering hit

a blinded frenzy

                 of deadly poison

           mournful when i come down

 i felt the death of my essence

                  still i want to take flight again

    yearning death by your blade

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I suspect you tried to write of a little erotica here as well? If so, you've done a remarkably good job portraying so. Feeling as if that space was made only for that one, certain person. At first I envisioned, say, a heroine addiction; but that does not seem to be, you. I suppose. Nonetheless, I liked this.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tai, I wanted that addictive feel to it, but no, not heroin!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow! Hi Frie, I can't breath after reading this, lol :) it is too intense and beautiful. It is very graphics that continue flashing back in my mind. This is very effective excellent work. Thanks for sharing.

[Frieda P]

Ha too bad I wasn't here earlier, when you needed mouth to mouth lol....!

Thanks, you always thrill me with your reviews Marc.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol ahhaha :) you're welcome Frie :) always.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, I was so hoping you'd catch this one! ;-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes I love the poem :)

[Frieda P]

Well, thanks again, but i meant the comment teehee :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is what I call brutal honesty... but a situation like this calls for it... if someone is sucking your soul dry it is time to get as far away from them as possible.

[Frieda P]

Hey, like Barbara said, 'it hurts so good' sometimes....thanks Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I thought John Cougar Mellancamp said that? LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha I think he stole it from Barb! Lol...love him by the way!

[Barbara Walker]

That's how addiction is-you may know it's bad for you, but you do it anyway. It hurts so good...

[Frieda P]

I really love 'hurts so good' it really says it all...thank Barbara!

[Annabelle Lee]

I have a feeling this was meant to be a whole lot sexier than how I read it. But metaphoric writes can be taken in different ways, Right? And I actually though of this poison maybe relating to hate or anger, or in my personal experience, family problems. Maybe just blowing hot air here, but who knows?

[Frieda P]

Once it's out there, you can make of it what you wish Annabelle-interesting your take on this one, thanks!

[Rita L. Sev]

Wild imagery in this one. You bring so many emotions into your poetry - wonderful piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, glad you enjoyed it.

[redflutterby]

Holy sheet.... this just grabs you and slams like a freight train. Do they have rehab for that kind of lust??

[Frieda P]

Ha, I sure hoping fook not! Wanted to start your bad Frieday off with a bang....hope it gets better from here.... ;-)

[redflutterby]

Thanks girl... words are cathartic!! ;-)

[Leslie Philibert]

the road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom.....what more can I say ?

[Frieda P]

Sometimes, sometimes not Leslie, thanks for your visit and review.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

This is just brilliant. I really enjoyed this piece. Great imagery. Thanks for sharing Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

More than happy to share my toxicity with you. :-)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

I am honoured ;)

[Frieda P]

I wonder, do two toxins cancel each other out? ha... ;-)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Hmm, I shall google it lol ;)

[Frieda P]

Lol, let me know! ;-)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Lol, I hate to be the bearer of bad news Frieda, but unfortunately it doesn't ;)

[Frieda P]

Hahahahaa!!

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Hey Jude......Helter Skelter.......either would suffice. Loved the poem too

[Frieda P]

Guess you didn't like my choice of music...thanks Dr Wood.

[Dr. Wood ?]

love the beatles.....brought up with them and hold them very high indeed..in fact they are on the top of my tree

[Mauricio Montoya]

speaking of the Beatles, about Helter Skelter. this piece opens many doors.
Excellent write.

[Frieda P]

Til I get to the bottom and I see you again...thanks Mauricio.

[Mauricio Montoya]

WHOA! WERE THINKING ON THE SAME LINE

[Frieda P]

OH S**T!