~Reverberations~

You are that whisper floating on air

the echoes of zephyrs sweet warmth

i feel you in every season, see you in every face

i laid down my poetry in sumptuous grassy knolls

for you to taste the splendor of love metaphors

personification of bloody purging hearts

coiled around voices tinged with manifestations

impregnated by infiltration of reverberated procreation 

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Wow, this is incredible. I am always so bent on writing poetry that is loooong and drawn out in order to get my point (if I have one) across, and then I come across something like this, that is so beautiful and right on in such short and sweet fashion. Your imagery is exquisite...reminds me a little of Dicikinson. Word choice; you blew me away here.

I too have felt this way; laying down my love in metaphors and clauses, words and phrases for someone, hoping beyond myself that they would see the truth in my heartbreak. Nicely done, my friend!

[Frieda P]

Wow, what a great review, really appreciate this one Friday. I'm prone to writing long & drawn out myself, been trying to do something a bit different, so glad you liked this one. Thanks Friday!

[quinfinn]

whachoo tawkin bout, willis!? are we waxing romance here, or is this heartache? i get confuzzled sometimes. i guess the two are one and the same at times....maybe that's the rub.

[Frieda P]

Guess you answered your own question there quin! ;-)

[quinfinn]

hell, i rectum.....

[Pete Langley]

I suggest you have had a bout of vocabularial indigestion, Frieda! What a flood of juicy articulacy! Way to go,girl! P.

[Frieda P]

Ha, I was going to stop after 'metaphor' but my pen wouldn't let me! I think it was more indigestion in my brain...thanks Pete.

[Jack...]

Very intense and spirited a'flow this poem comes to me this morning. The beuaty is captured so eloquently by your undying creative abilities. So short and yet so very large in meaning, feelings and emotion. Very nice.

[Frieda P]

As always, you flatter me with your kind words Jack, thanks so much.

[Ayvid N]

An awe-inspiringly piece here Frieda! Indeed those are truly special who become whispers and prevail around us forever, inspiring us to create such beauty with words like these! Hats off...Keep up this spirit...immortalise our love!

[Frieda P]

I know we were separated at birth! ;-)
Thanks Divya....

[Eddie Phillips]

There is creative beauty in this poem. I love the last line of this poem. This is true talent and beauty: "Impregnated by infiltrations of reverberated procreation" Such a metaphorical masterpiece. I am happy I got a chance to read it. Loved It!

[Frieda P]

So delighted you like that one, not even sure where it came from myself to be honest, thanks Eddie!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow! I can the feel beauty of words expressed in this piece. Love it Frie, it is a captivating work. Great Penned, Great reads.

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, thanks so much Marc! :-)