~Reverberations~

You are that whisper floating on air

the echoes of zephyrs sweet warmth

i feel you in every season, see you in every face

i laid down my poetry in sumptuous grassy knolls

for you to taste the splendor of love metaphors

personification of bloody purging hearts

coiled around voices tinged with manifestations

impregnated by infiltration of reverberated procreation 

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Wow, this is incredible. I am always so bent on writing poetry that is loooong and drawn out in order to get my point (if I have one) across, and then I come across something like this, that is so beautiful and right on in such short and sweet fashion. Your imagery is exquisite...reminds me a little of Dicikinson. Word choice; you blew me away here.

I too have felt this way; laying down my love in metaphors and clauses, words and phrases for someone, hoping beyond myself that they would see the truth in my heartbreak. Nicely done, my friend!

[Frieda P]

Wow, what a great review, really appreciate this one Friday. I'm prone to writing long & drawn out myself, been trying to do something a bit different, so glad you liked this one. Thanks Friday!

[KAOlmsted]

"...echoes of zephyrs..." that just flows off my tongue. Nicely done...

[Frieda P]

One of my favorite words 'zephyrs', thanks the kimmer, glad you enjoyed this one...

[KAOlmsted]

I did, so much. My pleasure.

[Michael G.]

Splendid. First line is really, really good.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Michael, happy you enjoyed this one.

[kublakhan27]

At the risk of sounding somewhat pretentious, this one sounds a little like me ;P There's that rollicking flow of complexity that seems to demand a slow read...thankfully for you, nobody is complex as I am, and your message comes through crystal-clear...surely I haven't been influencing you now have I? ;P

[Frieda P]

Ha, pretentious, you? If I wrote in Braille, you'd get it...! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha very true ;P

[Sir Joseph]

The way you put this poem together was brilliant! I am sorry that i am not that good of a reviewer but this poem is wonderful!

[Frieda P]

If you felt it, that's a great review to me Sir Joseph, thanks so much!

[Tai Ryens]

What better topic to write of than love &'beauty? Absolutely stunning, and the 'personification of bloody purging hearts' left me breathless. Diction would suggest many meanings, branching off here and there into different concepts and topics, but I just had to keep reading on until I found one without holes. Beauty seemed to do the trick, for there is beauty even in the coldest of winters. The darkest of dawns. The bloodiest of scars.

[Frieda P]

Funny you should say, since I felt this one took off in a different direction than I first intended, thanks for this amazing review Tai.

[s y e]

Wooooo, is this amazing or what?! It is!! I loved it, I had to look up some words :P Dont tell, because you are such a smart cookie, you like to use 'big words' hehe.

I loved the picture! Its gorgeous! Amazing write, sweets!

[Frieda P]

Ha how do you think I learned 'big words' as you call them...lol!

Thanks sweetie, will miss you heaps! x

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice poem. Zephyr is a cool word.

[Frieda P]

One of my favorites, thanks Baby.

[KeeD]

The piece was nothing short from brilliant but the last line is something so perfect and striking, all I can say is WOW!

[Frieda P]

And I say Wow back to your review, thanks Kee...you're on the MIA list again!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I am tasting these metaphors, and what a delicious array of words, dear Frieda!
I did feel the waves of "splendor" all the way down to my toes... I believe the "infiltration" was going to happen no matter what! lol
Breathtaking write.~xo~

[Frieda P]

Wooo, so glad you're 'feeling' me dear Robbie, this review blew my skirt up! lol Thanks so much, you're the best! xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You're wearing a skirt on this windy day?...show those sexy legs, girl!! ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha yep, and don't even ask about the undies! ;-P

[The 13th Eros]

All I heard was "skirt," "legs," and "undies." Does anything else matter. ;)

[Frieda P]

Not unless you have the chilled wine ;-)

[The 13th Eros]

Oh, it's chilled. And roses? Of course. Also, a masseur who can massage those hard to reach places. ;)

[Frieda P]

Passing on the roses, you have any wildflowers? ;-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Is there party going on?.wildflowers, wine, undies...?...sounds like Hef's in town! :))

[Frieda P]

Ha we need a smoking jacket for that scene!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I believe that could be arranged...;)

[Frieda P]

And a Hef under 113 would be nice too ;-P

[The 13th Eros]

I do go back a few thousand years, but believe me.. I have plenty of experience with mortals. ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL I'm sure you do! ;)

[The 13th Eros]

Smiling... well... a god has to eat. ;)

[The 13th Eros]

You do know how to send warm ripples across eternity, fair lady Frieda. Release the powers found in words and actions; those desires yet be set on fire. We each hold a flame...

[Frieda P]

You do know how to make a gal swoon with your kind words dear Eros....

[The 13th Eros]

My words... you oughta see what my hands can do. ;)