Wow, this is incredible. I am always so bent on writing poetry that is loooong and drawn out in order to get my point (if I have one) across, and then I come across something like this, that is so beautiful and right on in such short and sweet fashion. Your imagery is exquisite...reminds me a little of Dicikinson. Word choice; you blew me away here.
I too have felt this way; laying down my love in metaphors and clauses, words and phrases for someone, hoping beyond myself that they would see the truth in my heartbreak. Nicely done, my friend!
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11 Years Ago
Wow, what a great review, really appreciate this one Friday. I'm prone to writing long & drawn out m.. read moreWow, what a great review, really appreciate this one Friday. I'm prone to writing long & drawn out myself, been trying to do something a bit different, so glad you liked this one. Thanks Friday!
At the risk of sounding somewhat pretentious, this one sounds a little like me ;P There's that rollicking flow of complexity that seems to demand a slow read...thankfully for you, nobody is complex as I am, and your message comes through crystal-clear...surely I haven't been influencing you now have I? ;P
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11 Years Ago
Ha, pretentious, you? If I wrote in Braille, you'd get it...! ;-P
What better topic to write of than love &'beauty? Absolutely stunning, and the 'personification of bloody purging hearts' left me breathless. Diction would suggest many meanings, branching off here and there into different concepts and topics, but I just had to keep reading on until I found one without holes. Beauty seemed to do the trick, for there is beauty even in the coldest of winters. The darkest of dawns. The bloodiest of scars.
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11 Years Ago
Funny you should say, since I felt this one took off in a different direction than I first intended,.. read moreFunny you should say, since I felt this one took off in a different direction than I first intended, thanks for this amazing review Tai.
Wooooo, is this amazing or what?! It is!! I loved it, I had to look up some words :P Dont tell, because you are such a smart cookie, you like to use 'big words' hehe.
I loved the picture! Its gorgeous! Amazing write, sweets!
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11 Years Ago
Ha how do you think I learned 'big words' as you call them...lol!
Thanks sweetie, will .. read moreHa how do you think I learned 'big words' as you call them...lol!
I am tasting these metaphors, and what a delicious array of words, dear Frieda!
I did feel the waves of "splendor" all the way down to my toes... I believe the "infiltration" was going to happen no matter what! lol
Breathtaking write.~xo~
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11 Years Ago
Wooo, so glad you're 'feeling' me dear Robbie, this review blew my skirt up! lol Thanks so much, yo.. read moreWooo, so glad you're 'feeling' me dear Robbie, this review blew my skirt up! lol Thanks so much, you're the best! xo
11 Years Ago
You're wearing a skirt on this windy day?...show those sexy legs, girl!! ;)
11 Years Ago
Ha yep, and don't even ask about the undies! ;-P
11 Years Ago
All I heard was "skirt," "legs," and "undies." Does anything else matter. ;)
11 Years Ago
Not unless you have the chilled wine ;-)
11 Years Ago
Oh, it's chilled. And roses? Of course. Also, a masseur who can massage those hard to reach places. .. read moreOh, it's chilled. And roses? Of course. Also, a masseur who can massage those hard to reach places. ;)
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Passing on the roses, you have any wildflowers? ;-)
11 Years Ago
Is there party going on?.wildflowers, wine, undies...?...sounds like Hef's in town! :))
You do know how to send warm ripples across eternity, fair lady Frieda. Release the powers found in words and actions; those desires yet be set on fire. We each hold a flame...
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11 Years Ago
You do know how to make a gal swoon with your kind words dear Eros....
11 Years Ago
My words... you oughta see what my hands can do. ;)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..