~Reverberations~

~Reverberations~

A Poem by Frieda P

You are that whisper floating on air
the echoes of zephyrs sweet warmth
i feel you in every season, see you in every face
i laid down my poetry in sumptuous grassy knolls
for you to taste the splendor of love metaphors
personification of bloody purging hearts
coiled around voices tinged with manifestations
impregnated by infiltration of reverberated procreation 


© 2013 Frieda P


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Wow, this is incredible. I am always so bent on writing poetry that is loooong and drawn out in order to get my point (if I have one) across, and then I come across something like this, that is so beautiful and right on in such short and sweet fashion. Your imagery is exquisite...reminds me a little of Dicikinson. Word choice; you blew me away here.

I too have felt this way; laying down my love in metaphors and clauses, words and phrases for someone, hoping beyond myself that they would see the truth in my heartbreak. Nicely done, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow, what a great review, really appreciate this one Friday. I'm prone to writing long & drawn out m.. read more



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"...echoes of zephyrs..." that just flows off my tongue. Nicely done...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

One of my favorite words 'zephyrs', thanks the kimmer, glad you enjoyed this one...
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

I did, so much. My pleasure.
Splendid. First line is really, really good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Michael, happy you enjoyed this one.
At the risk of sounding somewhat pretentious, this one sounds a little like me ;P There's that rollicking flow of complexity that seems to demand a slow read...thankfully for you, nobody is complex as I am, and your message comes through crystal-clear...surely I haven't been influencing you now have I? ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, pretentious, you? If I wrote in Braille, you'd get it...! ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha very true ;P
The way you put this poem together was brilliant! I am sorry that i am not that good of a reviewer but this poem is wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

If you felt it, that's a great review to me Sir Joseph, thanks so much!
What better topic to write of than love &'beauty? Absolutely stunning, and the 'personification of bloody purging hearts' left me breathless. Diction would suggest many meanings, branching off here and there into different concepts and topics, but I just had to keep reading on until I found one without holes. Beauty seemed to do the trick, for there is beauty even in the coldest of winters. The darkest of dawns. The bloodiest of scars.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Funny you should say, since I felt this one took off in a different direction than I first intended,.. read more
Wooooo, is this amazing or what?! It is!! I loved it, I had to look up some words :P Dont tell, because you are such a smart cookie, you like to use 'big words' hehe.

I loved the picture! Its gorgeous! Amazing write, sweets!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha how do you think I learned 'big words' as you call them...lol!

Thanks sweetie, will .. read more
Nice poem. Zephyr is a cool word.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

One of my favorites, thanks Baby.
The piece was nothing short from brilliant but the last line is something so perfect and striking, all I can say is WOW!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

And I say Wow back to your review, thanks Kee...you're on the MIA list again!
I am tasting these metaphors, and what a delicious array of words, dear Frieda!
I did feel the waves of "splendor" all the way down to my toes... I believe the "infiltration" was going to happen no matter what! lol
Breathtaking write.~xo~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The 13th Eros

11 Years Ago

I do go back a few thousand years, but believe me.. I have plenty of experience with mortals. ;)
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

LOL I'm sure you do! ;)
The 13th Eros

11 Years Ago

Smiling... well... a god has to eat. ;)
You do know how to send warm ripples across eternity, fair lady Frieda. Release the powers found in words and actions; those desires yet be set on fire. We each hold a flame...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You do know how to make a gal swoon with your kind words dear Eros....
The 13th Eros

11 Years Ago

My words... you oughta see what my hands can do. ;)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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