~Pink Polka Dot dreaming...

~Pink Polka Dot dreaming...

A Poem by Frieda P
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Dedicated to 'our' little noodle, Sye, who won my heart over from the very start.

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When I was a little girl,
        I wanted nothing more
         than to grow up~
an old soul before my time,
       life lessons taught too soon
      Now I'm grown, not much since then,
       I want to go back and do it again
this time, it'll  be playing dress up 
            in pink polka dot high heels
oodles of butterfly kisses &
      smiling swing sets 
        aside a chatty, babbling brook 
Picture perfect life 
is just a myth & fantasy,
      a big girl can still dream
    can't she? 

© 2013 Frieda P


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Ain't it funny how, when we're kids we just can't wait to grow up, and "be our own boss"????
And then you get there, and sadly discover that you have more "bosses" now than ever before!!
And most of 'em are kids!!!!!

Ahhh, well...tis a pretty dream, Frieda...I have it a lot, myself.
But I never put it into words as well as you have done!
Fantastic write, my friend!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks sweet Angel...hopefully all our dreams come true eventually.



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She is the best, Sye, I mean.

This is great Frieda!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

She's the best! Thanks Kylie.
Kylie

10 Years Ago

She is that. And always a pleasure, when it's about my baby, I gotta read it! :-)
Very sweet, love the image of the polka dot shoes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I know how you feel. I was just like this, and am still. Love the image of the pink polka dot shoes!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


aww this was cute for Noodle :) nice job Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


awwwe sweet one for noodle poodle free :) i miss you lady!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


*hugs Frieda* and cannot say anymore *more hugs* (thank you for this poem of dreams as big as the world).

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dare to dream big...............

Posted 11 Years Ago


I don't know. What if her dreams were as feverish as my understanding that she grew up?

Posted 11 Years Ago


The mere interaction between you two is cute ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


yes, wonderful write. and a great tribute to Noodle mom.

when I was young, in fact in the first house I remember as home, there was a woods out back behind a stone wall. I'd climb over it and wander back about a quarter mile to a small brook that was maybe 3 foot wide, maybe smaller... I was much smaller then than my memories I think.

Anyway, that was a magic place for me. I'd go and dream all sorts of things there. Your poem brought back the memory.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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