Sea Swells

My muse was Star's lovely painting...

My thoughts drift 

             out to sea

like a lovely butterfly

 in flight

salt air fills my senses 

              with elation

i feel you breathe

                at the nape of my neck

your fingers stroking

            through my hair

my body dances

  like the peaks of waves

   Your strong hands awash

 over my breasts

heaving in surrender,

           as a sigh of Ecstasy rises

      sweet feather touch of  my petals

    like an ocean roar

ripples my pulse plunging

           deeper waves release

               

I dabble my soul into the florid

   tidal of our rapture

thoughts of your return

               turn my body deliquescent

     fiery flow like majestic crests

      swell within me

      

~etch our names in the timeless

 traces of hourglass sand~

Author's Note

Artwork by my lovely friend *Star*

Reviews

[quinfinn]

are you having a steamy week my love? this is positively filled with the essence of passionate embrace and divine sensuality. to quote one of my favorite actors "that's the stuff that dreams are made of" . it seems you are bent on making every man on here a quivering mass of steaming flesh....my toes are smoking, and they are too young to smoke! i love your passionate writes, miss posies!

[Frieda P]

ha, you always make me smile with your reviews my dear friend...smoking toes, now that I'd love to see....

[Renée]

passion..is a good thing ( ; nice work

[Blue Ivory]

Wonderful painting. I can see how one may be moved by it. The color of you font reflects the sea :3 I love how the last stanza's black. It has a dramatic effect. And your words are really sweet.

[KAOlmsted]

Another breathtakingly beautiful piece to accompany a breathtakingly beautiful picture...simply that...breathtakingly beautiful.

[KeeD]

Oh someone's in the mood :D this was brilliant, I blinked my eyes with surprise a couple of times through my reading of this poem.. wow

[kublakhan27]

I don't know how to put it...this piece just comes to me at a good time...in the wake of all the well-documented things swirling around my head this week, it is nice to sit back and read a piece of uninhibited romance, or flat-out lust, I don't know...I'm still not quite in the frame of mind to decipher which one it is haha Lovely words though, and a lovely mental movie it evokes ;)

[David Scott]

I could feel the emotion of your write Frieda. Your friend is proud of what she inspired I'm sure! You should be as well.

[Ken Simm.]

A simply lovely use of words.

[cartera]

The sea as a metaphor for Love; we see it, we think we know it, but there is so much more going on underneath. Sometimes it rages, sometimes it is calm, sometimes it seems endless, sometimes it is bounded by dark dangerous-looking islands.
A good choice of vehicle for your thoughts, feelings.
ATB
Alex.

[Sir Joseph]

Bravo on such a beautiful and passionate write! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sir Joseph :-)

[redflutterby]

I love the ocean!!! This poem makes me think of sea swells by the sea shore.... lol. ;-)

[Frieda P]

ha there's a poem in there somewhere ;-)